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Peace Be With You
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Peace Be With You |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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 "Peace Be With You" Staring at the mirrored soul Apologies drift aimlessly Futures foretold, believed not Behold what could and should be When peace is with you. How could you forget your way inside the comfort of your home Look inside yourself to see What cannot be concealed to others When peace walks with you. When endings must be endured When warmth is cold as frost on snow When virtues of wet sand crumbles from relentless surf poundings May peace embrace you. When the skin becomes thin and brittle When you have loved and lost When daylight will not illuminate the dark laments of shame May peace find your soul. You may have forgotten the sweet-vined taste of friends When the gold of truths are hopelessly tangled May Peace Be With You. (c) 2002 Picasso Lyrics |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"You may have forgotten the sweet-vined taste of friends When the gold of truths are hopelessly tangled May Peace Be With You."   (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too always feel saddened when we seem to forget the simple pleasures of life in times of great grief and my heartt goes out to all who feels this way and I peay them all peace and love! (big huggssssssss) This is soooooo wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff darling boy this is utterly first class writing, definitely one of your best. The lines in this simply are awesome, the depth and the emotion you’ve managed to convey here is outstanding When endings must be endured When warmth is cold as frost on snow When virtues of wet sand crumbles from relentless surf poundings May peace embrace you. When the skin becomes thin and brittle When you have loved and lost When daylight will not illuminate the dark laments of shame May peace find your soul As for the message darling boy it is simply stunning. Peace be with you too.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Staring at the mirrored soul Apologies drift aimlessly Futures foretold, believed not Behold what could and should be When peace is with you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jeff...love the message of peace and the way it could and should be.... love the pic of the peace dove as well. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You may have forgotten the sweet-vined taste of friends When the gold of truths are hopelessly tangled May Peace Be With You. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ May Peace be with you also. Hugs. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I believe this is one of the finer pieces you have ever done. Reminds me of the peace that surpasses all understanding I am blessed to enjoy...very well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you and Peace be with you too *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider, Amen and with you too. A fine write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"How could you forget your way inside the comfort of your home Look inside yourself to see What cannot be concealed to others When peace walks with you." Thank you, Jeff. This is beautifully written. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When endings must be endured When warmth is cold as frost on snow When virtues of wet sand crumbles from relentless surf poundings May peace embrace you. Thanks for posting this one, Jeff..... Its very beautiful and meaningful  ~peaceful hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes we all seem to take life for granted sometimes..and overlook the riches we already have...nicely penned Jeff as always..hugs ~Victoria
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ShadowRider There is so much termoil in life, sometimes it is hard to get to a place of peace, but it is within us all to find with attitude. Thank you for this thoughtful poem. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
To all you of generous response: May i humbly decline, to take credit for this. It is the message that writes the words the importance of peace in our hearts that upon a page etched itself. and may i also thank you, for spending this time with me as i give you back Promises that Peace will always be with you, tSR [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (04-06-2002 03:35 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ShadowRider - this peace you write in this poem I could certainly use right now... BC |
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