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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-02-18 11:42 AM


Basked In Serenity

When I need uplifting
I stroll beside the sea
Softly the salty spray
Soon refreshes me

Helps the mind clear
Refresh and restore
Over the sand dunes
Along by the shore

Sand neath my feet
With purpose to be
All the mind chaos
I sweep out to sea

To ocean  reaching
My mind undressed
In baring emotions
As waves caressed

Waves awash sand
A clean honest tide
Basked in serenity
A warmth felt inside

HopeĀ© 2002


© Copyright 2002 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-02-18 01:10 PM


HopeS,
Tender and beautiful.

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2 posted 2002-02-18 08:17 PM




(sigh) Oh Hope, this is soooooo peaceful and gorgeous, I had a great sense of tranquility reading these words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alan
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3 posted 2002-02-19 01:14 PM


Soft and gentle as always. Great job little lady
alan

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4 posted 2002-02-19 02:38 PM


of course I had to reply to this--it had my name all over it!

A lilting verse of tranquility, indeed. Rare moments in my life. Enjoyed much, Hope!

Startime
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Canada
5 posted 2002-02-19 02:41 PM


*sigh* how I wish I had a shore to walk along...Magnificent..Through the vision you wove I walked the same shore and felt its serenity...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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