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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
There are days you cannot trust. Like people they lure you with Gleaming smile offering warmth Only to turn on you with cold shoulder When you venture too far from shelter Today is one of those Breaking early with radiance, Diamonds spread on sheets of field She stretched out in promise Then rose slowly allowing me to watch Her begin to practice her wiles On all that ventured out with no care There are days you cannot trust What your eyes see Or heart longs for Because the day turns these things Into weapons against you Today is one of those |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, ow....but so well done, I barely felt the sting.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Some days the skin is more susceptible to the weather outside. I'm glad to see you here this morning with your poetry that I always like to read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Mind's eye stores the truth. Hidden words between the lines Reveal if only's. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This, too, will pass  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Understanding those days. Good work, Ron. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There are days you cannot trust What your eyes see Or heart longs for Because the day turns these things Into weapons against you Like the baggage we check in and hope gets lost? Sometimes we just have to wing it!!! Enjoyed this Cpat~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-05-2002 10:12 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so very sad but true, sweet friend, I too have faced this kind of dilemma so many times and there will always be those that we can ot trust but there will also be friends, even if just a few, that will always be true and loyal to our hearts! (sigh) This is wonderfully sad but fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
There are days you cannot trust What your eyes see Or heart longs for Because the day turns these things Into weapons against you Damn, I like this! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"There are days you cannot trust What your eyes see Or heart longs for Because the day turns these things Into weapons against you" I know this....very well said |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I reckon tomorrow is another day... |
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