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Fighting Possible Tragedy
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Fighting Possible Tragedy |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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her depths miss your hands always reaching in breathing the passion that dwelled just beneath the surface of you. It seems that life is in the way obligations sinks the total magic of two and you both hold your heads just above the surface of stagnating water hoping, one day to reach better bodies of love and to float there in the bliss of settling peace. there could be no worse sadness than two meant to be hearts that never get to touch. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Indeed my friend, there is none like this. But, soon, all hearts touch. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think someday meant to be hearts will get to touch. James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sadness, yes, that is sadness. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
her depths miss your hands always reaching in breathing the passion that dwelled just beneath the surface of you. It seems that life is in the way yes!! like these lines especially!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Temptress. A lovely write, enjoyed |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there |
This touches me so deeply...beautiful... a sad but beautiful write... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: these words speak for many. . . and again, show the depth of feeling in your work. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, I am in love with the girl of my dreams, yet me and my RosePetal live far apart and I pray that we meet for I can not imagine a world without her! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
One day, I agree with this...the next I wonder the cost of risk. Think I will save this. Thanks. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Past the obligation of life, hearts touch I know... otherwise you wouldn't have written this poem. Very thought filled writing..touching me. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
agree that hearts that were meant to touch, don't..but there are hearts for all of us I think  well done. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Why, but should fate stand in one's way a thumb's up or down, she is always fey A power unflexed, scarcely dreamed of This power of desire. . .is the power of Love. Words you write that are meant to be and still may be realized. Sweetly but sadly said well. tSR |
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