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The He In She
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The He In She |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Splendor this; She becomes of him A willow in the bloom of rose An oak of sculptered lines repose And soft within his hand she goes Shining this He is more than half A lion heart to guard her well An eagle soaring high to dwell And gentle of these treasures tell Sharing this She will be both and all A merge of purposeful intent An island through the storms as sent And this together radiant The He in She magnificent Copyright Kkh 4/5/02 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A merge of purposeful intent An island through the storms as sent And this together radiant The He in She magnificent" I really liked the entire poem, but the ending was just perfect  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wow! You are good! ((ThisDiamond)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
 A very interesting and potent rhyme scheme and fantastic words to fill it. You are very impressive  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
looks and sounds great..very innovative and special..a pleasure to read |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous,l sweet friend, this is a gorgeous uniting of hearts that shines from your lips! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much1 You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - loved this write, full of thought and feelings. I like your writings... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where ARE the adjectives when I need them? This is absolutely superb, IWIHWT, and by gosh, I am supremely glad YOU did!!! It's a Keeper of the first magnitude, and I cannot seem to type this fast enough to let you know!!! I would say submit this to wherever you want, they will ALL grab it up! Congratulations on a truly spectacular write! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you. I appreciate all your enthusiasm. ThisDiamond |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond What Sunshine said so well, yes, this is outstanding! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very cool, interesting form, and beautiful words. Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Different...I really enjoyed reading this! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Truly superb writing. I am in awe. Enjoyed it tremendously. Shenachie |
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