A Lovers Note... (Marsha's Challenge)

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-04-04 09:08 PM

A Lovers Note...
By: Noah Eaton
4/4/02

If I asked you to dance
Would you take my hand?
Would you ask me to hold you
I want you to be happy tonight
Would you cry
When I looked into your eyes
Knowing that I'll always keep you safe
For dear life...

I want to hear you laugh
Every time I'll laugh with you
Please share your tears with me
You can always trust on me
That I'll be your shoulder
You can cry over
When you need someone
To make you happy

My angel
If there is anything you need from me
I swear
I'll make all your dreams come true
I just want to feel the warmth of your body
Pressed close to my beating heart
I want to kiss your soft neck
Let me hold you...

Hand in hand I promise I'll walk the world with you
Kiss your lips before you fall asleep
Caress your angel silk and satin hair
Softly I will take your breath away
I just want to stare into your gorgeous green eyes
Until I fall asleep
Your smile is the last thing I want to see
Before I begin to dream of you in my sleep, my sweet love...

I love you Joanna, you'll always be the girl of my dreams! (

)

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-04-2002 09:09 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-04-04 09:12 PM

Noah, this is a great poem, I have to find out what the challenge is. You write to Joanna so beautifully. I can't wait for you two to be together.

Sandra

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-04 09:13 PM

Ahhh this is beautiful sweet Noah!
Challenge well met I would say...
and I am sure Joanna will love this as well.
Now...where do I find this challenge? Hummm.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-04-04 09:54 PM

As always, a HallMark moment sweet Noah!

ThisDiamond

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-04-04 10:44 PM

This is a truly beautiful love note Noah. Great work here. So romantic. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

DarkAngelChelle
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 87
Kansas

5 posted 2002-04-04 10:49 PM

VERY sweet and romantic. Your words just flow so beautifully from the depths of your heart.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2002-04-04 11:07 PM

Lucky , lucky lady to recieve beautiful tender caring words such as this Noah
you have a heart of gold
Hope

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-04-05 12:03 PM

One of your best Noah...may she melt into your arms...James

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-04-05 01:56 AM

aww my dear, you know i will always take your hand and dance with you under the stars.
very pretty poem, i didn't get to see what the challenge was but it seems you've done it perfectly!

well done

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