Open Poetry #19 |
A day in the park |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The breeze gods were kind I felt lovely beneath your voice Sinking into bare lover’s carpet Hiding inside my statue with gazing eyes and moving fingers You wanted everything while I danced around weeping cherry trees drinking in the fountain of your words I loved your pen when we connected the dots of sun freckles you loved the messages my body spelled for you some were wicked some were love words you read them out loud like you always do even the ones on the inside you didn’t know there were more on my tongue just before the messenger ran out of time and we were stuck there in limbo of equinox where only you could speak my language |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ooh, this is so good, Regina. I just love the way you use the words, it makes it sound naughty and nice at once. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous wordfs always sing with music and gorgeous imagery! (kiss on cheek) May you always have wonderful inspiring strolls like these everyday and makes loves spring always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Regina your words simply dance down the page in this piece. Lovely, yet sensual. Enjoyed so much this evening. Hugs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do this so effortlessly...do more... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Regina...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The words just flow into your pen dear somy~. This is truly wonderous use of wording and sensuality and ....just...just fantastic.... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It's those special moments forever spilled in the hour glass of memories that we so like to turn over and over again and you turn them so much better than most. I do so love the way your words taunt the reader on and then with each line tease the brain into a thoughtless wandering of calmness. You definitely hold a golden pen and know how to fill the pages with beauty with each stroke. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, you loved the messages my body spelled for you Who wouldn't? Don't ever stop...I couldn't live without more of these! Bless you dear poet. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
trees are words there with watching leaves they write poems of lovers in entwine shall we give them books to write enjoyed this |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..real talent. you never fail to amaze me with the string of images and the ways you take the reader inside the feelings. I enjoyed.. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
A beautiful use of imagery Regina. I love your work. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Regina, You always do a dance in my mind. |
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