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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-04-04 06:56 PM






Pale blush of moonlight
Skirting the dappled nightscape
The stars yawn with sleep

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-04 07:16 PM


Ivy Rose, this is simply breathtaking, I love it. floria

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2 posted 2002-04-04 07:18 PM


yes, I liked it too
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3 posted 2002-04-04 08:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-04 08:22 PM



Ah shoot...you made ME yawn...

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5 posted 2002-04-04 08:24 PM


oooh how pretty, the stars yawn with sleep, loved that line!!!
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6 posted 2002-04-04 08:27 PM


How very peaceful. Thanks!

((Ivy))
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7 posted 2002-04-04 09:37 PM


Ivy, this is one of my favorite Haiku ever,  
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-04-04 09:44 PM


"The stars yawn with sleep"...James
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