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Unknown Valentine
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Unknown Valentine |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Unknown Valentine I’ve not gazed into your eyes to see love reflected there Still in my heart I surmise of me you may be aware I’ve not heard your voice speaking soft words that would capture me Yet in my dreams I’m seeking the one who holds my heart’s key I’ve not felt your gentle touch or trembled from it’s sweet heat But in sleep I feel the clutch of hot desire when we meet I’ve not tasted of your kiss as we drink of passion’s wine Still in dreams I feel such bliss when on love’s nectar we dine I’ve not been in your embrace to listen to your heart beat Yet at midnight trace your face and loving kisses repeat I’ve not felt caress divine from a love we both pursue But my unknown Valentine I send all my love to you Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, Just lovely,  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Keep it up Karen we may just be able to conjure him up. Love it, dream queen. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Seymour...Thank you... Sandra....*giggling*A dream is just a wish..maybe there are miracles on Valentine's day, Sandra...all we can do is hope...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - this is very touching, you have a very soft heart, and a suberb pen... BC |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This feels like a surprise behind the smile...well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karen HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! ~Smiles and hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...one of my favorites...James |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What a lucky unknown valentine, Sure hope he becomes real to this wonderful poetess. love this Karen, floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
now there must be a man out there you can slip one into his pocket haa...and that would drive him crazy  ...wondering who his secret admirer was ..hugss Happy valentines day karen..  ~Vic |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very beautifully written, Karen.  If I were a witch I'd bring him to life and he'd make your life easy he'd remove all your strife If I were a witch I'd make him so real a man you would see a love you would feel But I'm only human so all I can do is hope that you'll soon find someone who loves you And because we're both poets who dabble in rhyme I hope that you meet him in a very short time copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Just beautiful, Karen dear....Happy Valentine's Day to you & hope your dreams come true...  |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Karen, You Paint your dreams in such vivid colours!!!! Excellent  Long Distance Love Song Last night I held you while you cried. I wept along with you... I was that moved to see that you. Felt free enought to cry with me. Last night I held you while you cried, For I knew not what else to do, But comfort you and hold you close, And give you all the love you need. Last night I dreamt of you...somehow. And you were crying in my dreams. But when I awoke this mourning. I found you were far away. Sometimes a sadness fills my heart, It overwhelms at times like these, When I cannot reach out my hand, And draw you close to me. ...................................... Last night I felt you hold me, As I cried inside your dreams. There is someone out there... a soulmate that you are connected to... although you may not know his name or even see his face clearly now.... he is thinking of you just as you are thinking of him... Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully penned by a truly wonderful lady...so deserving of a Valentine.... I know Lou would not mind me sending you one...so check your mail...Happy Valentine's day... |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karen - This makes me want to go to bed right now and see what my dreams may bring.lol Really liked the idea behind this one and how you carried it through in each stanza. Very nice. Dave |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
unknown I may be yet I exist in your dreams and you in my heart Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (02-15-2002 09:34 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
 *bump* |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karen This is just gorgeous, I love it. Your words always flow so well and leave me with a smile. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karen, I'm sure he receives your love deep into his soul. And I must believe that he also send you his. Your spirits are always together. In God's own dimension, not seen on earth. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Hello, Karen. I just read "I Weave" and it was so sad I couldn't comment. But this is much more upbeat. Here's hoping you find your unknown valentine. |
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