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Open Poetry #19
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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-04-04 02:59 AM

Saying Something
That Is True

Do you need someone to say that
they love you a lot (lots of times)
to really believe that
their love is true?

I do.

But I also need their actions to
convince me that they love me
as much as they say that they do.

Yes it is both the saying
and doing that prove  
love to be true.

JamesLee
April04
2002
© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 2002-04-04 03:10 AM

I love the truth.  Why waste time on deception?  Nice write.
Saunni
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2 posted 2002-04-04 03:10 AM

James,so very good.I feel the same way. You expressed it well.

Sauni @~~~>~~

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-04-04 10:09 PM

Thank you Saxoness and Sauni for the nice responses...James
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