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Open Poetry #19

Rock Steady

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-04-04 02:13 AM

Sprung from a spring
on an axle
bolted down
I swivel
spinning in circles
minimizing the shock
on the cushion of your lap
I rock.....

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2002-04-04 03:16 AM

Oh, Awesome just awesome! Great write here!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2002-04-04 07:47 AM

Like it!!

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-04-04 08:42 AM

BluesSerenade,
Made me smile, enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-04-04 08:46 AM

(smiles) Awwwwww, I too just simply love this, your words always spring up to action across these pages! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-04-04 09:05 AM

very cool write.....

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2002-04-04 10:02 AM

Lori,
That's legal eh?

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2002-04-04 10:24 AM

nicely done, I enjoyed.

last three lines definitely make the poem..

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

8 posted 2002-04-04 10:38 AM

Well well....

This was short but very impacting... hehe
could almost picture something to go to the words....

Nice

Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

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