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Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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0 posted 2002-04-04 12:05 PM

Memorizing You
By Larry Chadwick

If I could memorize the mysteries of you,
Would it be enough to carry me through
The challenge of being so far apart.
The first thing I’d memorize is your heart.

Then I’d look long into your face,
Memorizing your beauty and your grace.
I’d run my hands all through your hair,
Remembering what they felt like there.

And hopefully you wouldn’t really mind,
I’d like to memorize your cute behind.
Though I’m not often a man who begs,
Would you also let me memorize your legs?

Do you mind if I study this view awhile,
I’d really like to remember your profile?
And yes I even have the nerve,
To want to memorize your curves.

And since I’m actually doing nuttin’,
I fully intend to memorize your button.
If you’ll give me the chance,
Let me memorize how you dance.

Though I like the way you wiggle,
Please help me remember how you giggle.
I’d rather not remember how you weep,
But I’d love to memorize how you sleep.

Then help me with my choice,
I’d like to memorize your voice.
And because I know your always there,
I plan to remember how much you care.

It’s now that I begin to realize,
There is so much of you to memorize.
But it has to last while we’re apart,
It will protect me from a broken heart.

April 3, 2002

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-04-04 12:55 PM

I like the way you outlined this Larry.
You are quite the artist when something
beautiful catches your eye and keeps you
focused.

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2002-04-04 03:13 AM

Larry C, I just love this. Such a cool title also! Wonderful write.

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-04-04 08:44 AM

Oh I love this thought and the entire poem is wonderful, Memorizing You. wonderful write Larry,

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-04-04 08:51 AM

hugsss to you....be well enjoyed the write....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-04-04 09:02 AM

damn it Larry, this made me smile then laugh then cry. Go figure.... LOL

I am keeping this

Larry C

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Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2002-04-04 09:59 AM

Lori,
Thank you for such kind words.

Saunni,
Wow, how nice of you. Thanks.

floria,
I like your kind heart. Thanks.

Lauren,
Thanks.

Susan,

Really? Wow, I'm likin' this. Thanks.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-04-04 12:37 PM

Hi Larry, this is cute. Seems to me you have been lookin at someones back view a lot lately

Sandra

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

8 posted 2002-04-04 12:45 PM

Ok then, do me a favor, and write more of this flavor...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-04-04 01:30 PM

Oh yes Larry...I like your style!
Love this one...sure do!
Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

10 posted 2002-04-04 01:47 PM

You're a talented and creative poet. I share your words with my wife, often.

Thanks,
Melton

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-04-04 02:59 PM

Larry - Ah my friend, how nice it is to memorize...

BC

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

12 posted 2002-04-04 05:42 PM

Hello Larry

This was so cute in the way it was written and left me with a smile. By the way, I have long legs!!!lol

Take care......Sue

Suetang

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

13 posted 2002-04-04 06:00 PM

Larry, what a fine piece! I love this one!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2002-04-04 06:32 PM

Larry C,
Good write and I enjoyed the read.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2002-04-04 06:45 PM

enjoyed

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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United States

16 posted 2002-04-04 11:45 PM

Sandra,
And the problem is...

Thanks.

Decaflame,
I'm not sure my memory is that good.

Thanks.

Nancy Lee,
Thanks so very much!

2dalimit,
That has to be the biggest compliment I ever heard! Wow. Thanks.

Bill,
Ah...you're back. Hi Bill and thanks.

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

17 posted 2002-04-04 11:48 PM

Sue,
Thanks a bunch. And those legs...I knew!

PS,
I do appreciate that tons! Thanks.

Sy,
Thank you Sy...a lot.

Vandana,
Thanks. Always.

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