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0 posted 2002-04-03 10:59 PM



"I" touch the tip of your middle finger
as you hold out your left hand to me.
And with your palm thus facing up,
it becomes a notepad for me.
so I lay my index finger gently
across your palm and spell "L"
Then touch your ring fingertip,
as you sigh an audible "O"
Two fingers form the "V"
across your palm.
and as our index fingers meet
I spell out the letter "E"
And this exchange, this synergy,
is our finger touch ecstasy.
I touch the tip of your middle finger
and draw my finger down the palm
and up alongside the thumb.                 (J)
I touch the tip of your thumb.              (A)
Then I touch the tip of your middle finger. (I)
And I lay mt first three fingers carefully
across your warm open palm.                 (M)
And then touch the tip of your index finger.(E)
And Jaime smiles back at me,
in finger touch ecstasy.


I sure hope I finger spelled this correctly!
I'm teaching myself some basic signing. It ain't easy to teach an older gal new tricks! If anyone out there knows this type of finger signing, please let me know if this poem says what I wanted it to say.

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-03 11:01 PM


It said it all...brilliantly ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-04-03 11:09 PM


Hey, thanks Diamond!
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3 posted 2002-04-03 11:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know a little bit of sign language, and on the letters I think you did perfectly! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully inventive, sweet friend, your words always amaze me and make me smile! (kiss on cheek) This is very original, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-03 11:11 PM


Left me with a smile...beautifully done Kacy!

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5 posted 2002-04-03 11:11 PM


Kacy~

Yes its correct...and nicely said....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

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6 posted 2002-04-03 11:13 PM


Kacy,
ROFTL If you're wrong I wanna know what you really said! Excellent write.

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7 posted 2002-04-03 11:17 PM


Noah, Nancy, and Lauren, thanks!  This one ws a little awkward for me, but hey, I'm like a kindergartener with this stuff.
Larry, ROTFLMAO. If it's wrong, how would I know? Can I be held accountable for ignorance?

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-04-04 09:34 AM


Beeeeeeooooootifully done
Az ewe kin cee, ah kain't spel.

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9 posted 2002-04-14 03:27 AM


Beautifully sensuous but innocent!
Well done!
Neha

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