Open Poetry #19 |
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If you loved today |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
If you loved today, you will love tomorrow, for tomorrow will be just like today. That’s what the weatherman said. Only he did not see the dark clouds overhead. He only saw the sunshine. I wish I had his view. I wish I had only seen the sunshine, not the stormy clouds of you. And so perhaps, I will not love tomorrow, as I loved today. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun, Oh yes you will. LOL. Good write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Midnite The weather man is not always right...and besides, without the storm, the fair time would be blaa. Great metaphor for feeling here. Much enjoyed! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There's always tomorrow though! Damn weatherman is never right, But there are always little pockets of sun peaking through those dark clouds. I've seen em myelf!! ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Forget the weatherman! What does he know. Now about that storm...really? I hate that. ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kacy...I liked how you did this poem...very nice! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
don't forget that silver lining.... ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kacy, this is very well done! Love the way you used the weather in regard to the way you are feeling.... but, just remember.... "The sun will come out tomorrow...." ...and there will be a rainbow for you to dance upon! Hugs sweet poetess! |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well done. I wish I could say it is going to be sunny tomorrow, but I somehow doubt it. Sandra |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey, thanks dear friends! LOL, our weatherman misses the target about 50% of the time. I actually wrote this one as it came to me, about 5 minutes after listening to "Sgt Shultz", our local TV weather dude. (Hope he forgives me.) |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Wow, this reminded me of that 10,000 Maniacs song 'Like The Weather", I know with all my heart that though there will always be storms to nweather, your extended forecast looks sunny and you will again feel this love again and again! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Kacy~ WOW you should hear ours, fun little write, and I am betting you love again... ![]() Lauren~ Step through the |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
This is beautiful. Neha |
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