Open Poetry #19 |
salty slaves |
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
salty slaves I dreamt again my sought desire your parted lips I brought to fire I plunged into your waters warm we rocked and tossed as in a storm And when the tide again arose we awaked from our repose We held on tight as rolled the waves bound together like salty slaves Kraw'3.19.02 "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry [This message has been edited by Krawdad (04-04-2002 12:45 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s...enjoyed your movement of words M |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
rythmic and softly sensual... delicious... ~Tier |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad, This is an excellent write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...yes...love this...sure do! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
salty slaves...a wonderful phrase, befitting an equally excellent poem |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad Sometimes it is like that. Enjoyed seeing the ocean through your eyes. |
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