Open Poetry #19 |
Lifting Faith |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
These days, These days I try to look at life Not through life, It’s hard to do It's humbling Even the rain can be larger at times Somewhat like the structure Of music I feel like I have walked Ten thousand miles Ridden bareback Too long And been blown by a wind, That at times (that word again) Is so un for giving All For the search of truth Now, not just a “life truth” But an inner seeking, Hard kicking truth To knock me back to my Senses, which I can’t, seem to find It must be lost upon the structure of landscapes, Which, presently escapes me Why you ask? April has been a long month And right now anything is possible Every poem is a spark right? Maybe? A wall of shooting stars Waiting for the empty feelings To ignite a flame That would be cause of a spark, correct? Then explain what might be the fire? I have lifted faith and hope To one, bound in a failure, I can not Explain The reefs are exploding in full color Now; beauty And the clouds, well they know The language in which I speak For myself? I will be like the structure of music Faithful as I appear Held together Through time Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-03-2002 10:23 PM).] |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I'm trying too....very well done Lauren. ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Be lifted... wonderful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I will be like the structure of music Faithful as I appear Held together Through time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wonderful Lauren....your poetry continues to grow... and you are glowing girl! Hugs! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, And the clouds, well they know The language in which I speak I think I may be learning it as well...at least I hope. Courage to you always. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love how you emphasized the word "appear" with bold text, I think a key part of lifting faith is to appear before Him and embrace the light! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Struggling a little, but beautifully so... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Being faithful and true to ourself is the keyword(s). There is light at the end of the tunnel I am convinced! It doesn't seem to matter what topic you write of, there is always so much passion and depth in your poetry. Be well Lauren. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Don't we all "appear" held together, my friend? Hey, we do what me must and keep going. This one made me think and I much enjoy poetry that causes me to ponder. Nice work, Lauren. *hugs* Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautifully done!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Love to all...thank you for your kindness and replies...I appreciate you all much... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*BUMP* |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
When life is seen through the heart, the eyes can close and be. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: this is my favorite part. . .and shows just how far you've come. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Even the rain can be larger at times Somewhat like the structure Of music I love the way you write, Lauren.... ~lots of hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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