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The Mist of Love
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The Mist of Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Mist of Love They’re phantoms of exotic flight Candles glittering in the night Shadows on the walls of life Shadows that are like a wife They glow in green in flowered fields Like poppies of exotic yields Dance in shadows of your mind Some are clear and some confined. They haunt you that are all you know They fill your bag of freedoms sew. Tip the scales of justice lie Flutter like a butterfly. They fly within a sky of blue In tandem with the real of you You cannot help the love you feel Although you feel a thief and steal But who can thieve the mist of love Unless it be the turtledove |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour this is totally lovely, wonderful and so enjoyable to read, It made my morning. floria Floria |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shadows on the walls of life Shadows that are like a wife They glow in green in flowered fields Like poppies of exotic yields ================================= They haunt you that are all you know They fill your bag of freedoms sew. Tip the scales of justice lie Flutter like a butterfly. They fly within a sky of blue In tandem with the real of you You cannot help the love you feel Although you feel a thief and steal But who can thieve the mist of love Unless it be the turtledove ===================================== Tell Randy that I am making a list ... one of rhyme scheme dreams and gleams of gist. Of all the things to hold in heart and of fervored fist ... the things one needs to assist in a mind's fantasy exist. Tell him to meet me in the morn's misty mist ... where the horizon waits for the dawn's daily kiss. I'll bring the things that takes reality on a twist ... all the dreams we thought we had dismissed or missed. Tell him upon this tryst I do insist ... I will persist should he try to resist.  ~~~ *winkiewinkie*  "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Mournings coo in morning's dew brings the skies to heightened blue and in the slip of I love you seek the one who holds you true |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. JM, I must say you are taking your chances with Randy. LOL But I'll insist he behave. Winkiewinkie Stinky Lady in White, Good advice and a for you. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deliciously flowing. Much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Enjoyed the delicious. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I think you could thieve the mist of love, is that Randy dude a turtle dove? |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Seymour, your pen leaketh honey, this morning.  ((Seymour)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your pen flows with such beauty today Sy.......dreamy stuff here....*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
A keeper, enjoyed the read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Sometimes, Silver, Thank you, thank you. Gentle Spirit, Sweet comment. Thanks Tim. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo pretty, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make us smile and have our hearts flittering like butterflies through your visions! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Who indeed, not the turtledove, but *sigh* |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Seymour...Loved this classical poem of love. The words are lyrical, musical and sing of love. ***Ivy Rose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you kind friend. Midnitesun, Who indeed, thank you. Ivy Rose, Thank you for the sweet comment. |
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Kathleen Junior Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 20Indiana |
it's lovely!! Kathleen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kathleen, Thank you for the lovely. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Enjoyed your enjoy. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
They’re phantoms of exotic flight..."" and yes haunting in all their splendor and glory....lovely words, and poem here.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, Thank you sweet. |
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