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All Yours All Mine
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All Yours All Mine |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859
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This was written for my assignement in my writing course. floria All Yours All Mine Golden , molten sun, Orange tinted sky, Breathless clouds abound, Lawns of green, Tall stately trees, Flowers sublime, I breath deeply, It fills my soul with the wonders of this earth. My eyes behold the beauty of majestic mountains with crystalline snow as icing on a sweet desert. The rivers down below glimmer in the sun like liquid crystals of blue. And with each changing season the earth puts on new clothes. The colors of leaves so spectacular seem to be painted by the hand of God. I thank Almighty God for this universe Masterpieces of His design, All yours All mine Floria [This message has been edited by strbbux (04-03-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I have missed your gorgeous words so much! (sigh) I know your teacher is going to love this so much as I do, your gorgeous words always make Mother Nature smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-03-2002 04:48 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Floria You also paint many masterpieces from your wonderful palette of words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Floria~ This is absolutely beautiful ! Wonderful imagery ... I'd think you 'aced' the course ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It is a beautiful poem. I wish I had the nature poem ability, it is just not there Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Floria darling girl, this is utterly utterly wonderful, yes it is absolutely perfect. YOU delight the senses with this delicious and wondrous new style. I love it. What can I say darling heart you have grown so much in the last few months, Your love of HIM definitely shows it decorates and illuminates your gift of poetry with pure wonder. This is incredibly beautiful and I love it utterly utterly. Brilliantly done  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am so glad you're back Floria, you paint your poetry so well. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
My eyes behold the beauty of majestic mountains with crystalline snow as icing on a sweet desert. The rivers down below glimmer in the sun like liquid crystals of blue.'' Thats beauty, this is so amamzing my friend...and I ditto lori's words, so good to see ya back... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Floria Beautiful imagery...a lovely poem! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Don't get there often enough...you've written it well! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
We missed you Floria..nicely done..hope you are enjoying your class..hugss ~Victoria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dear friends one and all. My time is so limited right now. Please know that I read and appreciate every one of the responses that I get from all of you. Take care, love to you all, and thank you for all your kind responses. floria Floria |
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