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vandana
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0 posted 2002-04-03 10:41 AM



Iam everything,
Iam weak,
And Iam sad and blue
Iam lost,
Iam alone
Iam blue and sad
That Is why
Iam everything,
Iam song
That can sing a heart away,
You are far away
And I cannot feel
The touch of love
So Iam crying
And Iam
trying
to let It go,
Iam everything
That I can be for now
Iam every note
That you play,
Every tune
I listen carefully ,
Iam a bird,
Who can fly up
In the skY
Higer than ground,
I can be everything
If I want to be
Iam everything
And that I will be for you
My love
my love I cannot deny It that,
Because Iam everything,
Everything for you
Everything that I can be for you

[This message has been edited by vandana (04-03-2002 10:45 AM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-04-03 10:48 AM




(smiles) Yes you are, you have all the music of life and love in your heart and you will always be everything to the one you love! (kiss on cheek) May your love give you all your heart desires and fill you with true happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-03 11:56 AM



Love transcends many things, Vandana...space being one of them...it is good to see you writing again!

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-04-03 03:34 PM


you are everything
that you need to be
to be you

this was well done

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4 posted 2002-04-03 04:31 PM


Very nicely done Vandana, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-04-03 08:28 PM


you are everything that a woman should be!
loved it

suthern
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6 posted 2002-04-04 12:37 PM


You are far away
And I cannot feel
The touch of love
So Iam crying
And Iam
trying
to let It go,
Iam everything
That I can be for now

I like this very much, vandana. *S*

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