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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-04-03 05:48 AM

I am the dark cliffs of half moon bay
you are the myst of pacifica
we laugh morning sounds in our embrace
our concussion arouses the montery pine
that peeks over jagged browways

you climb me early before I wake
I feel your damp feet in my hidden
I know your toes when they undo there
and leave the damp that you wear as perfume
you climb with eyes closed view

you whisper surf voice quiet
that you like the feel of me
and that your vision is always clouded
when you watch me stand erect
boldly over your open coves of willing

we talk to the sun from under her fog cape
she giggles like a girl watching love
in a window with hand on mouth secrets
then she becomes a warm woman dancing
and let her cape fall away for our eyes

we are voyeurs then touching, she and we

©Dark

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-03 07:11 AM

Yes!

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-04-03 08:23 AM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooo wonderful, sweet friend, I watched as the girl grew up into a lovely woman and how through time her views of love changed and welcomed it with the girls spirit in her! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Cpat Hair

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3 posted 2002-04-03 08:35 AM

ah....again you weave the words into a readers mind.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-04-03 09:40 AM

DarkStranger~
Softly sensual~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2002-04-03 10:28 AM

Sunshine, first view of the day, and she is lovely with her smile
Thank you so much

Noah my friend, thank you for your reads

Cpat, arrigoto for the review

Marge, thanks for the whispers

Martie

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California

6 posted 2002-04-03 11:10 AM

DS

Beautifully woven fabric of ocean and mist and more.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2002-04-03 11:14 AM

Ms Martie, thank you for the eye touch

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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8 posted 2002-04-03 11:14 AM

This is Dark Stranger at his very best....and it's always soooooooo goood......hmmm. *w* Great write DS...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-04-03 01:24 PM

I agree with Donna..and this is one of my favorites..loved it DS ..

~Victoria

vandana

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USA

10 posted 2002-04-03 02:04 PM

enjoyed

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-04-03 02:39 PM

Wow, this is excellent.

"you whisper surf voice quiet
that you like the feel of me
and that your vision is always clouded
when you watch me stand erect
boldly over your open coves of willing"

That part made me want to take her place

Sandra

strbbux
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12 posted 2002-04-03 03:15 PM

Very very nice dark, I truly enjoyed your words, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2002-04-03 03:31 PM

Donna, thank you babe..it is quite the place there...you would love it.

Victoria, bless you for your read and comments, glad you liked the view.

Vandana , thank you much

Cat'moon you would look grand there at that site along highway 1...thank you

Strbbux, thanks Floria for your read and words

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2002-04-04 12:03 PM

Hey Dark Stranger~ I really love the spin you put on the places I've been.
Half Moon bay is my kind of place, even in the fog there is a mystical kind of magic that hovers at the edge.
Lovely scenery big sir~ (pun intended)

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

15 posted 2002-04-04 12:40 PM

WEll this is a first, I can bump your poem up and it doesn't go anywhere!
Could be my computer, it hasn't been feeling well lately. Hate to see you fade into the sunset so soon dark. One more time now!!!

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

16 posted 2002-04-04 10:05 AM

Hmmmm blues...dang I love your bumps..
(whoops sorry) grin
thanks hon

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