Open Poetry #19 |
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one and moon bay |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
I am the dark cliffs of half moon bay you are the myst of pacifica we laugh morning sounds in our embrace our concussion arouses the montery pine that peeks over jagged browways you climb me early before I wake I feel your damp feet in my hidden I know your toes when they undo there and leave the damp that you wear as perfume you climb with eyes closed view you whisper surf voice quiet that you like the feel of me and that your vision is always clouded when you watch me stand erect boldly over your open coves of willing we talk to the sun from under her fog cape she giggles like a girl watching love in a window with hand on mouth secrets then she becomes a warm woman dancing and let her cape fall away for our eyes we are voyeurs then touching, she and we ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooo wonderful, sweet friend, I watched as the girl grew up into a lovely woman and how through time her views of love changed and welcomed it with the girls spirit in her! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah....again you weave the words into a readers mind. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Softly sensual~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, first view of the day, and she is lovely with her smile Thank you so much Noah my friend, thank you for your reads Cpat, arrigoto for the review Marge, thanks for the whispers |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Beautifully woven fabric of ocean and mist and more. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Martie, thank you for the eye touch |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is Dark Stranger at his very best....and it's always soooooooo goood......hmmm. *w* Great write DS... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I agree with Donna..and this is one of my favorites..loved it DS .. ~Victoria |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, this is excellent. "you whisper surf voice quiet that you like the feel of me and that your vision is always clouded when you watch me stand erect boldly over your open coves of willing" That part made me want to take her place ![]() Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very very nice dark, I truly enjoyed your words, floria Floria |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Donna, thank you babe..it is quite the place there...you would love it. Victoria, bless you for your read and comments, glad you liked the view. Vandana , thank you much Cat'moon you would look grand there at that site along highway 1...thank you Strbbux, thanks Floria for your read and words |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey Dark Stranger~ I really love the spin you put on the places I've been. Half Moon bay is my kind of place, even in the fog there is a mystical kind of magic that hovers at the edge. Lovely scenery big sir~ (pun intended) ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
WEll this is a first, I can bump your poem up and it doesn't go anywhere! Could be my computer, it hasn't been feeling well lately. Hate to see you fade into the sunset so soon dark. One more time now!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Hmmmm blues...dang I love your bumps.. (whoops sorry) grin thanks hon |
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