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Masked Intruder
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0 posted 2002-04-03 12:16 PM



When fire doesn’t blaze,
but quickly kindles with scintillating passion.
When a comet doesn’t fall,
but deftly splits the night sky with lambent glow.
When an ember doesn’t burn,
but holds your delicate gaze with fiery ballet.
Then I will burst as an enflamed spark,
with fire in my eyes,
and drop back into your life,
like a falling star through the curtained sky.

[This is part two of When.




You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (04-03-2002 01:41 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-03 08:41 AM




(sigh) This is such a passionate and romantic sequel to your wonderful series, sweet friend, it feels as though there is going to be a Part 3, is there going to be? (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, pure love shines in your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Philip, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-03 08:57 AM


there is a world of passion out there!well done


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3 posted 2002-04-03 09:35 AM


MaskedIntruder~
Ahhhhh, this day just got a whole lot prettier~
TWO gorgeous writes ... very muchly enjoyed~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-04-03 10:21 AM


enjoyed
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