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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Just Average Commonplace held her face, a nose set below eyes that had not yet seen it all though in truth, no real surprises any more capable hands, surely, well kept and blue lined average / standard / common all applying two levels to a two syllable personage until… until she smiles somehow the sun is lessened and skies weep though clear blue she keeps that curve of her lip reserved just for him the see of him touch of skin sound traversing lip to lip feel of hand upon the hip the thought of him to dream again and never does she wonder, then when she might love again commonplace is her face even in sleep… but see her dream of him… and you can’t help but smile |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lady darling girl OH MY! Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, This simply flows with the music of it dreamers delight, it’s sooooooooo beautiful in it’s language usage. Excellent writing from you absolutely excellent   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
contented she smiles enjoying the touch of him even in her sleep Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous romantic yearning of love, sweet friend, I too can't help but skile every time I dream of my Joanna and wondering if she is thinking of me and how happy she will be when me and her can finally meet! (kiss on cheek) This is so very lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, I had to read this as it addresses a concept I have long held...I'm average, and it's okay. I love the message and the style and the fact that it came from you. Well done indeed. An excuse has the skin of a reason, is stuffed with lies, and no matter how you cut it, it's still baloney. Dennis Farley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
the see of him touch of skin sound traversing lip to lip feel of hand upon the hip the thought of him to dream again and never does she wonder, then when she might love again ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Ah Yes, dear Lady...there isn't anything quite so beautiful as a woman in love...so I have been told. Lovely write indeed. Hugs. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And LIW...this is superb...such is the smile of one so lovely... |
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