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Labyrinth of Love
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Labyrinth of Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Caught in a labyrinth of love its' tease unnatural and cruel she struggles so to find her way and lets her heart play as a fool. The twisted hopes on crooked dreams sill beckon her to walk upon the ins and outs of fantasy as real as if they were not wrong. The maze will wrap around itself the tunnels dark and twisting round she stumbles through the road of love and finds herself thrown to the ground. At end of time, when angels come and persuade her to say goodbye she steps out of the labyrinth a single tear is all she cries. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This work suggests the tragedy of the broken heart. You have expressed the confusion and the hopelessness very well. To find our wings, we must search the ashes. All good thoughts. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
catalinamoon, Well done, I always enjoy reading your poetry |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I can understand the confusion and anxiety you have been facing, but I promise you, very soon you will find true love and to you life will always be a merry-go-round in the hands of love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I will never ever "play the fool" again... harsh lessons, Sandra..but we DO learn from them... hugss M |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
a fool in love...is there any other kind? Sad and provoking...so you get nothing for provoking me! Chivalry is not dead. I saw it coughing up lung butter last night, but it was still alive. I think it has parvo. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write here Sandra! Have a Happy Easter sweetie....hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beauiful, Sandra. I think you and I share the same feelings. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sandra~ This was sad, and hauntingly beautiful....Be well PEACE to you..... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The twisted hopes on crooked dreams sill beckon her to walk upon the ins and outs of fantasy as real as if they were not wrong. Very beautiful, Sandra... Happy Easter  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The maze will wrap around itself the tunnels dark and twisting round she stumbles through the road of love and finds herself thrown to the ground. This is really an amazing, if sad write, Sandra. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sandra dear, did you read my mind when you wrote this one.....you wrote exactly what I've felt.....there truly are kindred spirits out there....and this......is stunning work......and I truly wonder if I EVER learn.... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-02-2002 07:58 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely said Sandra...and BTW...NOPE.. wasn't me...I have not been peeking in your window...LOL.. |
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