Open Poetry #19 |
This Vessel (rambling again...) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This vessel has weathered the most ominous of storms, it has seen it's share of waves that have felt as if... as if though they might never come to rest upon the shores. It has spent days endlessly floating... floating on the oceans of life waiting to find a tranquil harbor where it could rest awhile in peace. It has aged, showing the battlescars that it has survived... surviving during days of thunder yet mending as it drifted along under the sereneful quiet of star filled nights sprinkled with the glow from Lunas light. It has been navigated purposely to find this one place where it was destined to be and now feeling... feeling like it has finally arrived at this place that can be called home, it awaits, wondering if the gates will open and grant entrance to a worn, but aged with grace vessel~ -------------------------------------------------- This vessel is all I have to offer I will sail my vessel....until the river runs dry....Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-03-2002 11:11 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And a bettter gift could never be found Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
awww......that was so sweet....thank you... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and indeed, all that should be needed. . . well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ Lovely words and images here....be well my friend...peace to you... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is such a wonderful heartfelt ramble, sweet friend, may you ship to shore under the beaches of your dreams and find all the peace and freedom and joy you deserve so much in life! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna, perfectly wonderful write...my how you ramble sooo well! Hugs. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Elloquent, fragile, beautiful, such an incredible work! Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this expesses my thoughts perfectly. We do have that simpatico thing, it seems. Lovely write. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This vessel is a keeper...because the book inside is a masterpiece... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
No vessel as priceless a treasure as this classic beauty. ThisDiamond |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all of you, you are just so special....hugs and much peace ~D~ On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this was great Aunt Donna, i liked it alot. ~Mi dayz r cold without u, but I'm hurtin while I'm with u, I Know mi heart can't take no more I keep on running back to u...~Ashanti |
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