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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-04-02 01:02 PM

May I wear you in the night?

like a gossamer gown

drifting within rising tides

of your eyes

laying my head

upon the shoulder of a dream

bursting with hope

at the seams of destiny

as we walk together

hand in hand

in the summer rain

like barefoot lovers

melting upon pavements

steamy pavements of love

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (04-02-2002 01:03 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-04-02 01:07 PM

Ah, don't you think this would be impossible for a man to say no to?
Love it.
Sandra

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

2 posted 2002-04-02 01:08 PM

Simple, yet metaphorically clever and quite enjoyable.

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

3 posted 2002-04-02 01:10 PM

Really liked your imagery ...

Nice work

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-04-02 01:14 PM

To be worn on the heart, and the soul. Anyone would be lucky to be like this.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2002-04-02 01:24 PM

how beautiful penned.....love it!

((hugs))
Charisma

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-04-02 01:34 PM

please do not wear me
let me puddle at your feet
while worshiping you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-04-02 02:02 PM

thank you Sandra for your thoughtful comments hugss

Opeth..Thank you very much..and i am glad you enjoyed

Verve...Thank you

and for peeking in today

Moonlight Romeo..thank you and appreciate you nice comments

charisma..thank you sweet one..hugs..

interloper..thank you for those lovely words

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-04-02 02:46 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I know just how you feel for every night before I fall asleep, it always feels like the covers is her body over me and how I want to hold love close to my heart so much! (kiss on cheek) May love always wear you with bliss, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

9 posted 2002-04-02 04:23 PM

Very soft and romantic...lovely images Vic!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-04-02 04:26 PM

like barefoot lovers'

Lovin that line....sweet memories

HUGSSS ~V~

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-04-02 04:33 PM

A joy to read...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-04-02 05:18 PM

thank you noah

thank you dulcie..

thank you lauren..

thank you james ..

so glad you are enjoyed..nice to hear from all of you..

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

13 posted 2002-04-02 06:04 PM

Hello Victoria

Such beautiful visions were portrayed through your gorgeous words.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

14 posted 2002-04-02 06:29 PM

You have melted me with your words dear friend...and every other male!!!! Beautiful and touching poem Victoria!!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-04-02 07:23 PM

thank you Sue..nice to hear from you as always..hugs

thank you so much Brain..and for peeking in today

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

16 posted 2002-04-02 11:40 PM

May I wear you in the night?

like a gossamer gown

drifting within rising tides

of your eyes

laying my head

upon the shoulder of a dream

bursting with hope

at the seams of destiny

All I can say, Victoria is WOW!!!!!!!
You have really captured a mood here.

~many hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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