Open Poetry #19 |
At Last |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
At Last At last you've come along Your love the most beautiful song My lonely days are over because of you Chains broken, a happiness I never knew At last skies are blue above As we rejoice in our love My heart wrapped up in the magic of your kiss Together we share this magical bliss I found a dream in your eyes My heart beats with yours in heavenly sighs The night I found you All my dreams came true A dream that I can now call my own I've been watching this love and how it has grown Starting out as a friendship, deep and real You've made my tears fade, helped me to heal When you smile at me, a spell is cast I've found the love of my life at last Here we are in heaven, on clouds of white As our hearts shine together in the sweetness of the light "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (04-02-2002 12:47 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awright! 1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
It sounds like you have found your soulmate. These words expressed your feelings with a fresh touch of honesty. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
*Sighs* Lovely ... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we are all so happy for you and I hope this love lasts forever in your golden heart! (kiss on cheek) Your lovely words always make me smile and daydream happily, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A dream that I can now call my own I've been watching this love and how it has grown Starting out as a friendship, deep and real You've made my tears fade, helped me to heal beautiful amy.....just beautiful.... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! I hope this is from real life because it's so full of joy!!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A ton or two of love and devotion here in these words Amy...Nicely said.. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aimster, this is absolutely beautiful! You said so much in thi one. I love it! It's beyond words! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sister of my heart, this is awesome, I mean it, this is an incredible piece of writing, utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of love and light The whole poem is spectacular in its execution however these lines positively scream class to me At last skies are blue above As we rejoice in our love My heart wrapped up in the magic of your kiss Together we share this magical bliss I found a dream in your eyes My heart beats with yours in heavenly sighs The night I found you All my dreams came true Utterly utterly fabulous writing darling heart, I love it . You know I love this poem, purely perfect poetry Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amy, I'm so happy I got to read about your new love and I'm so happy for you. *Kiss on the cheek* for I wouldn't want your love to get jealous. Beautiful work. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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