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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Curved Contents think round pliant yielding lean mean harsh machines do not invite and streamlined has its place but wouldn’t you rather see content curved, carved with a spoon an invitation to warm |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
my eyes see better when viewing soft rounded sights turn to the left please Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I agree, completely. ~smile~ I love how what you write it open to a thousand interpretations... here, my first impression is of tight, hard, stickly girls contrasting to the soft inviting hourglass of voluptuous women... How straight lines are striking and impressive, but the curl of a palm or hip is so warm... |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Interloper, to the left, there you have it... Elizabeth, I am an admirer of your writings. Your comment plies well. Thank you... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, you always depict such small things so boldly in your words like we're identifying emotions through a magnifiying glass, sweet friend, I too feel that to envision lines is static and bleak, but to feel curves reveals so much more beauty and reality to a dream and joy! (sigh) This is excelelnt, sweet friend, you always have such talent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH yes...I do agree with Elizabeth...and her interpretation...Nicely done SN...very much so! |
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