Open Poetry #19 |
One More Dream |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
One More Dream Could I have one more dream? Instead of reality Where love and warmth Conceal lonely souls Where I could find Inspiration to be The spirit who offers Lover's affluence Could I have one more dream? In this world of solitude Where I will intrude rudely To defeat demons harm And where I can find harmony In daydreams near tomorrow With the strength to face Dreamless reality Can't dreams come true? In the world of reality Where soul and mind Can drift on courteous wings Where dust of love sprinkles, ' Twill blanket you and me Seal our souls together At least for eternity
~*Theresia~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Charisma, I could never ever imagine aworld without dreams, I think dreams are the most important part of our lives and what makes us smile and what makes us happy when we hold onto them and see them come true! (kiss on cheek) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I too wish for all your dreams to come true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
what world exists without dreams of another enjoyed this one |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma, this is one of your best, if not your very best....I love this, and I wish I wrote this I think it's excellent!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Charisma...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Charisma~ This is very touching...peaceful dreams to you... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes my friend. . . one more indeed. . . well done. . . I like the tone of this one. . . good to see you back. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for your comments, know that they are appreciated by me....love you all (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Fairy tales can come true it can happen to you if you're young at heart" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Could I have one more dream? Instead of reality Where love and warmth Conceal lonely souls Where I could find Inspiration to be I like this very much, Charisma... How wonderful might this life of mine be If I could wake to find my dreams are reality Instead I leave slumber to face worries and cares And a life that fuels the cruelest nightmares. Not really... but that's where my mind went on thoughts of dreams lasting. *S* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Charisma - yes, you may have one more dream, or as many as it takes to makes yours come true... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Can't dreams come true? In the world of reality Where soul and mind Can drift on courteous wings Where dust of love sprinkles, ' Twill blanket you and me Seal our souls together At least for eternity ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chrisma, this is beautiful... and yes, dreams do come true. Hugs. |
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whilbert New Member
since 2012-06-23
Posts 3 |
I have been reading some of your work. Beautiful!!! |
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