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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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lady wind, I see the lies in your eyes when you say it is not a storm there that is stirring the neckline of your horizon I have been here before as a tree and know how your breath feels when you sigh when you whisper to the night birds and now you smile at me wicked lipped at my mast wood that you believe is fragile you pat me with soft breeze fingers lest I turn my back and show my sails to another day in a distant place where the ocean is calm soft and ebbs in contentment are some winds never breathed quiet... ©Dark |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so soothing...just what is nice to read in the late evening... ~~~~~ and now you smile at me wicked lipped at my mast wood that you believe is fragile you pat me with soft breeze fingers lest I turn my back and show my sails to another day in a distant place where the ocean is calm soft and ebbs in contentment ~~~~~~ this in particular..  K |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!! Charisma |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Severn, thank you for the late night eyes Charisma, thank you for the moments to read and reply. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
have been here before as a tree and know how your breath feels when you sigh when you whisper to the night birds and now you smile at me wicked lipped at my mast wood that you believe is fragile you pat me with soft breeze fingers lest I turn my back and show my sails to another day in a distant place where the ocean is calm soft and ebbs in contentment descriptive passages such as this have made me a fan of your works... you always seem to weave into the images a quality that I envy |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I have been here before as a tree and know how your breath feels when you sigh" poetic gold my friend.... this rocks  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your imagery lays across this as softly as the pearls of cloud that lay gently across the neckline's horizon... very, Very well done.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You weave human temprament so easily into nature...as if they are the same, yet different. A talent I admire! Enjoyed as usual. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ I so enjoy your thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Smooth, and a hint of mystery. You write so well. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat, thank you so much for the review and comments, I value your input as well as the others. SEA, rocks is good, thank you for your morning moments SUNSHINE, as the sunshine rises to meet my eyes..your eyes rise and meet my words..such a blessing. Ms Martie, thank you for crossing the street and peeking in..I enjoy the visits Marge, you bless me sweet lady, thank you so much Cat'moon, thank you for coming close with your eyes, I appreciate you |
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