Open Poetry #19 |
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Reminisce |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Beneath pale glow of Luna's sliver, ...lays verdant plain of reminisce, Long long agoes on wind's deliver, ...blessed tunes of memories' bliss. Lone whippoorwill sings vesper song; ...mesmeric breezes touch one's soul, With murmers soft as passion's long, ...as nature cedes to night's extol. On wooded crest of distant hill, ...a solemn hush falls on all things, Silence reigns, no sound until, ...first breath of dawn in splendor sings. Memories fade in night's retreat, Sound forth the symphonies of daylight's greet. [This message has been edited by Tim (04-02-2002 08:01 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"On wooded crest of distant hill, ...a solemn hush falls on all things, Silence reigns, no sound until, ...first breath of dawn in splendor sings. Memories fade in night's retreat, Sound forth the symphonies of daylight's greet." such beauty found in your words ![]() ![]() |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the imagery of slowly being pulled along by invisible fingers, Tim. In fact, I need to read it again and again, if nothing more than for the silent soft it lends.... |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
quote: This is a beautiful line, Tim...I enjoyed the idea of a memory-filled night. ![]() ~sky I'm in charge, and I say question authority! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Memories fade in night's retreat, Sound forth the symphonies of daylight's greet." ![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful and filled with serenity, sweet friend, your sonnet shines with the remembrance of memories and the presrnt awakening with a brand new day of many more lovely promises to come! (sigh) Spring fills your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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