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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2002-03-27 01:15 PM

Our hearts are joined together by this moon
That hangs so brightly in the sky tonight.
And now, my eyes await the time when soon,
Our souls will meet in passion's sweet unite.
Star and sky will not turn their eyes our way,
For they hold the secrets our hearts have told;
So that when comes again the light of day,
We will not be the subject of its scold.
Now, with our secrets kept Dear One, let's fly
To that place where we need not wear these masks.
Where all that matters love, is you and I.
A place where we can in our lovelight bask.

Then there, my love, I'll take you in my arms.
There to fall, Dear One, to your many charms.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

1 posted 2002-03-27 01:39 PM

Hi Moonlight Romeo ...

Very sweet images you have here ... a very romantic picture you have painted ...

"Where all that matters love, is you and I.
A place where we can in our lovelight bask."

I'm touched ...

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-03-27 03:31 PM

wow Romeo, your Juliet will LOVE this!
Very romantic poem and it is going right into my library!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-03-27 03:39 PM

Sweet Romance. Sigh.

Nan

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

4 posted 2002-03-27 03:51 PM

SWEETHEART! FOR ME?? A SONNET!! REALLY?!

You're too kind, Dear!

This is beautiful. I should have known that you could do these. Maybe you should open up the secret place and sell tickets to a show of what real love is supposed to be like.

a thousand winks to ya, friend

not the sleepy kind either.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-03-27 04:44 PM

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-27 09:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I just know your Juliet will always be so lucky to have you and forever share this special place with you! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Romeo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2002-03-27 11:32 PM

Geesh..and I thought this was for ME!

YOU DON'T LOVE ME ANYMORE!!

I'm gonna tell!

I loved this, Moonlight Romeo. It has your wonderful flavor of simply adoring love..the kind that is so soft it makes you weak.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

8 posted 2002-03-29 01:26 PM

Thank you everyone for your replies.

Verve, thank you, I'm glad.

RosePetal, I am honored to be in your library.  Thank you.

Pilgrimage, there is nothing more in the world.  Thank you.

Dear One, yes, for you.  I'd sell tickets, but I really wouldn't want anyone to interrupt us.

vandana, thank you.

Mistletoe Angel, thank you for your very kind words.

Temptress, I'm sorry, but this isn't for you.

But, yes, it's full of that kind of love, the only kind there is. Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

9 posted 2002-03-30 01:43 AM

Bump..

You're adorable.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2002-03-30 01:55 AM

So delightful!
It is truly what lies in our heart that matters most.
Your name suits you well!!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2002-03-30 06:22 AM

Romeo,
you certainly live up to your name. Romantic and loving in one breath.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-04-02 08:11 PM

Excellent writing...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-04-02 08:36 PM

Wonderfully done! Hugs, Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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