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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-04-01 04:48 PM



My Tomorrow

You are my tomorrow
Erasing the last traces of my sorrow
There is saftey and love with you
Peace and serenity in all that you do

You know my heart inside and out
My most cherished friend, you are without a doubt
You wash away my tears
Drowning once and for all my fears

The sun has come out once and for all
Together we're there to catch each others fall
When the last star refuses to shine
I'll still be able to call you mine

For it's with your love I've become me
You've helped me to be free
You are the wind beneath my wings
The reason for why my heart sings

You are my tomorrow
Erasing the last traces of my sorrow
I hope to give you faith, that it's enough
To reach a new beginning
Love


"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (04-01-2002 04:49 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-01 04:49 PM


the sun still rises. . . and the heart still feels. . .

so may it always be my friend. . . wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may he be your every tomorrow and make there a getaway of true love always! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-01 07:43 PM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is another example of how amazing your writing is. You’ve grown darling heart you’ve grown, you show your heart proudly, you show your spirit delightfully and most of all you show that you are growing into a fabulous writer. You’ve always been good, you’re just getting better.

Fabulous writing darling heart


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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4 posted 2002-04-01 08:12 PM


Aimster...you write very nicely...enjoyed
this ..

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5 posted 2002-04-01 08:25 PM


Very nicely penned Amy!  Enjoyed much this evening.  Hugs, Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-04-01 08:40 PM


Beautiful.
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7 posted 2002-04-01 10:51 PM


*big sigh*
beautifully done Amy

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8 posted 2002-04-01 11:20 PM


Dear Amy~ This was like a breath of fresh air.

I can see clearly now the rain is gone, I can see all obstacles in my way, all of the dark clouds that had me blind....
It's going to be a bright, bright,
sunshiney day.   Sorry!  

Enjoyed the cleansing feel to this,
and isn't that the best!!!!

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