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Open Poetry #19

wet cement witness

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

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0 posted 2002-04-01 03:01 PM

trails of blood and tears
permanently etched
she grieves them release
and watches as they dry
indelibly carved
in stone
fingertips bloodied
she stopped not
each day traversing
or dodging the stones
from before

one day her fingers toward
heaven she sent flying
now each day begins
clean slated
she accepts forgiveness
and forget
becomes her

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (04-02-2002 11:39 AM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-04-01 03:59 PM

sounds as if you have found the answer for yourself...

nicely done my friend...

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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2 posted 2002-04-01 04:16 PM

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful read

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

3 posted 2002-04-01 06:38 PM

well cpat, I have tried the other way for 27 years, ultimately leading to my own demise, so, I have nothing to lose and everything to gain.....*smile* thank you

marsha, thank you very much

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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4 posted 2002-04-01 07:37 PM

Forget looks very becoming on you, miss. So does hope...

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2002-04-02 02:40 PM

thank you bal....sigh.....its about time, don't you think?

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