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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2002-02-28 05:45 PM

~* Footprints In The Sand *~
© Mysteria 02/2002

My footprints in the sand,
tell me where I've been.
I feel tendrils of the tide,
as they tickle over my skin.

The untamed ocean water
caresses the beaches shore.
I feel the ice-cold water;
I’ve felt so many times before.

I love the beauty of this sea,
that’s been to many other lands,
and made the greatest journey,
to wash upon these sands.

This ocean’s great horizon,
my place of complete serenity.
where I come to bare my soul
in complete confidentiality.

I cleanse my feet in its water,
and breathe in its salty air,
so amazed by its awesome power,
I simply stand and stare.

I don't know where I'm going,
but I do know what I've seen.
My footprints in the sand,
Tell me where I’ve been.

art: Steven Hanks

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-02-28 05:49 PM

And if you see a pair in view
but no visible form to leave
know that then I walk with you
and feel my tug on your sleeve

Then if you still feel all alone
there upon the sandy shore
hear my whisper in the wind
as Sun kisses your cheek once more

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-28-2002 05:50 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-28 05:51 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel, I LOVE the beach so so much and always yearn for it on days when I feel spent or just want to relax and dream away! (kiss on cheek) Just that thought of feeling so small compared to the ocean is always the most beautiful feeling of all, just as I love the water tickling my toes and spinning in the Chinook winds! We all love you so much, sweet friend, may many happy memories forever be etched in the sands of your heart forever and ever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2002-02-28 05:53 PM

Hello Sharon

This was visually stunning and I have been there many times. There is nothing like standing on the edge of the water and looking out towards the horizon. This was simply stunning and would have to be a favourite.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-02-28 05:54 PM

lovely words and painting too Sharon...and i also like your signature...as we poets have a great imagination ha..hugs

~Vic

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2002-02-28 06:16 PM

I don't know where I'm going,
but I do know what I've seen.
My footprints in the sand,
Tell me where I’ve been."

Isnt it the truth, to look back and see where footprints have gone.....wonderful writing Sharon~

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-28 07:12 PM

Sharon this is so beautiful. I know what you mean about standing at the water's edge and the calming effect it has on one. This is just lovely. You have captured it well. *Also smiling at Karilea's reply*
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2002-02-28 07:33 PM

Karilea ~ Can't hide anything from you can I

- thank you dear friend.

Sweet Noah ~ You enthusiastic replies always make me smile did you know that, and this time was no exception.

Sue ~ You my dear have some of the greatest beaches in the world, and I wish I could walk one with you, perhaps very soon I may just do that (thinking of going over there next year when Dawn goes there to be with Andy)

Victoria ~ Never have a met a man with a ton of education that could equal a man with "street smarts" never! LOL

Lauren ~ Yes it is sure the truth, was really reflecting today and lots of metaphors only I really get in there.

Nancy ~ The sea has always been my best friend.

Thank you all so much for reading this one.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2002-02-28 07:35 PM

I cleanse my feet in its water,
and breathe in its salty air,
so amazed by its awesome power,
I simply stand and stare.
================================

I wouldnt be able to breathe....
I cant even imagine how awesome it must be..
like heaven on earth...plus the sand between me toes

Beautiful poem of seaside serenity Sharon.

Mysteria

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Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-02-28 07:37 PM

Janet Marie ~ Sorry you slipped in as I was going out the back door, and yes it is breathtaking. Check your email I will share some pictures with you of the ocean and the mountains if you ever have a computer to see them *sighing*, and a hug!

Balladeer

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10 posted 2002-02-28 08:14 PM

As Satchel Paige once said, "Never look behind. You don't know what might be gaining on you!"

Nicely written, Mysteria. Forget the looking behind...you have miles of smooth sand in front of you waiting for your footsteps...focus on that

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

11 posted 2002-02-28 08:19 PM

This is such a peaceful poem. I like the graphic...it reminds me of a place I went as a kid.

Hopefloats
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since 2001-10-30

Posts 26
NH

12 posted 2002-02-28 08:34 PM

The images....how beautiful, and I could actually "feel" all of the words here. Exceptional writing here.....

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2002-02-28 09:11 PM

Sharon

The sea is also important to me...as are those footprints. This was so beautifully written, my friend. What a nice thought to think, that the ocean that splashes my feet also splashes yours.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

14 posted 2002-02-28 09:15 PM

...those footprints and sand stretch far back in time, my friend. Wouldn't it be interesting to follow them...back?

Loved this.

jwesley

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

15 posted 2002-02-28 09:34 PM

We are a composite of the path those footsteps have taken... Beautifully said, Mysterias one...

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

16 posted 2002-02-28 09:43 PM

It's amazing the effect that the sea and the sand has on each human being. This is lovely Mysteria. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

17 posted 2002-02-28 09:52 PM

wonderfully serene, enjoy seeing a tide wash
away my footprints!

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

18 posted 2002-02-28 10:02 PM

This is beautiful, Sharon. And, I love the picture.

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

19 posted 2002-02-28 11:09 PM

Mysteria - A very spiritual and peaceful write. Very nice.

Dave

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

20 posted 2002-02-28 11:37 PM

~* Thanks to each of you *~

I want to thank you all for commenting on this poem. For each of us have left our footprints along our way, thus making us who we are. We gain experience, and hopefully love, understanding and compassion along our way. It is what where we have been that makes us secure and proud of who we are and in where we are going. Thank you again.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

21 posted 2002-04-02 02:20 PM

I was just aimlessly wandering and I came across this, of course your title caught my eye

and I read it and I really truly liked it!! Truly an inspiration and it was really something I needed to read

Kristen

Verve
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

22 posted 2002-04-02 02:31 PM

Ah .... Lovely ...
Simply beautiful ... ...

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