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This Ache
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This Ache |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~ This Ache ~ Oh tell me why the pain is so? Why does it hurt why does it flow? Does the pain have to throb so much? Why can’t it have a softer touch? It twinges through the day and night Until I wish I could take flight I’d leave it behind to ache on and on Only reappear when the ache had gone Oh tell me why I deserve all this? What did I do to feel pain’s kiss? Why should I have this ache in me? Do I deserve such misery? I’ve been a good soul all my life I don’t cause trouble or stir strife The most I’ve ever done I think Is write in letters of blazing pink Oh tell me why this ache is there? Why should I have all of pains care? Why won’t this ache ever cease? Don’t I deserve a little peace? Okay I’ll submit I will give in I’ll go to that place of devil’s sin The Dentist can deliver me From toothache, I’ll go finally Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh, even if it's just a toothache, I still hate to see you hurt at all, for we all love you too much! (smiles) I am sure the dentist will fix everything and the ache will be gone before you knw it, sweet friedn, we all love you so much, you had me at the edge of my seat until the end! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, at last! A pain I'm not responsible for. How can you do this? Even in pain you write with such perfect metre and rhyme. I wish I had your talent. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Even good souls like you have to suffer in one way or another once in a while Marsha..hope you have a good dentist to take care of you dear..hugss...but like Kethry said..perfect metre and rhyme..loved it ~Victoria |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sweet sis, sorry to hear you're in so much pain! you better get your butt to the dentist, don't make me get on a plane and come find ya lol. Very good poem, as Keth said excellent meter and rhyme. take care. i'll speak to you soon. Love you! Amy  "you can't stop |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marsha...too many chocolate rabbits will do that ya know?..go to the dentist sweetie and give him all your money and he'll fix it for you. Take care and hope the ache goes away soon. Hugs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, ok, so you bottom-lined it and I didn't call to find out if you were ok, suffice to say that if you don't go to the dentist, you'll only kick yourself in The End. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ROFL Mushy, you had me all upset thinking your heart was breaking....dang it! You got me good...hope your tooth is feeling better |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
*LOL* We all have to face that ache from time to time, and yep, can't avoid that dentist no matter what! I hope he fixed it! Thanks for the chuckle! ((hug)) |
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