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The Journey
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The Journey |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
As I was wandering along the shores of life’s great open sea, I chanced upon your kindred soul you became a friend to me. We started on a journey to where, we did not know, content to travel hand in hand wherever we did go. We shared each other’s laughter as the waves lapped at our feet and listened to the music keeping time with each heartbeat. When one of us would stumble over rocks or fallen trees or feel the harshness of the wind replace the lightly blowing breeze the other one was always there to lend a friendly hand and lift each other’s spirits high and help each one to stand. Somewhere along our journey we held each other near a bond we felt between us that each of us held dear. Then on along that sandy shore we traveled once again knowing only what we felt not how, or why, or when and silently your soul and mine kept walking hand in hand. Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jan, what a delightful display of emotions you have penned. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Janmew this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolute diamond here. Truly excellent writing, which I enjoyed tremendously. Well done   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
Thank you so much Kethry and Marsha. Marsha I love your writing so much it is an honour to me that you like this so much. I've posted several here over the months but not sure if you have seen the others. Thanks again Jan  |
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