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Soft Hummed |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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When was it I learned This day was not just colored egg All full of children Was when the song deep tuned became like sun And I listened to angel voice The song a hymn soft hummed I know the power that reverence brings To life just a piece of clinging vine A soft float of moss across the top of water The true touch of listening wind From a place where it matters yes And song fills the emerald sky Deep in cave this lullaby does snuff out dark And turn beleaguered into start Each time a baby breathes And death captures another’s last I wonder at the majesty of this part This tiny finger with ridges getting older Still and all love keeps this pattern on my wall Where there is music majesty A pattern imprinted just like candle upon the dark Though hunters grab my meaning And into doubt I fall with wealth of words impart Still I sing this day a blessing for the green of this That pulls me into knowing how with beauty Time is still full and always captured Even when the drowning day is done and dreams dare I take a blessed breath of peace and I am there. [This message has been edited by Martie (03-31-2002 12:28 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too agree with all my heart that Easter is almsot like the May pole of spring, to celebrate the harvest of life that Jesus offers us and the bunny symbolizes the multiplying of blessings and new life in order! (kiss on cheek) May smiles and hope flourish your heart this Easter, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Martie, soft and restful and such a lovely write for Easter. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So...so very gentle... |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really enjoyed the read thank you for sharing |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful write Martie, soft and gentle Maree |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Still I sing this day a blessing for the green of this That pulls me into knowing how with beauty Time is still full and always captured Even when the drowning day is done and dreams dare I take a blessed breath of peace and I am there. Another gorgeous poem, Martie...perfect for Easter...  ~lots of bunny hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Martie this is such a warm inviting poem....just wonderful!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Delicious like chocolate bunny. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Even when the drowning day is done and dreams dare I take a blessed breath of peace and I am there. Awww yes!! He who seeks shall find, I suppose we all go about that in different ways but no doubt it leads to the same place!! Enjoyed this Martie~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-31-2002 05:32 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I take a blessed breath of peace and I am there. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah Martie, how I love this poem and especially the last line as it sums it all up and sets it gently down...perfectly. Hope yours was a peaceful Easter Sunday. ~Love & Bunny Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
softly hummed... title says it all... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
snapshot in soft hues enjoyed the view of this the comfort read |
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