Open Poetry #19 |
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All That You Give |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA ![]() |
All That You Give There is no way I can resist you. I hear your soothing voice Calling my name in soft tones Your words envelop and calm And I can feel my heart melt You can reassure my worries You chase my fears and doubt I hear the love your voice holds And it makes me smile Because you show me what Happiness truly is for the first time. I never thought someone could Open my heart so completely You know all my hopes and wants All my fears and all my worries You know the demons that chase And live inside my soul and dreams For the first time, in you I find Someone who won’t run away Instead you stand strong and wait With open arms to shelter me And give me the strength I need To help me find my way to A better life, a better world Now when my tears start to fall They are full of the love and peace That you so unselfishly give. This, of course, is for my Dave. Thank you for always being my inspiration. ![]() "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-31-2002 09:56 PM).] |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awww Tara, This is breath-taking! I can see that Dave is a really great guy by the way you describe the way he makes you feel! I wish you the utmost happiness always! (hugs) ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well girlie, I must say that your writing is at it's best when it's filled with love ![]() This is so heartfelt, and fits the Hallmark standards ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Awww, this is so sweet and tender Tara. Just so beautiful and full of love. Yep, I’m sure he’s going to love it…how could he not??? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Tara~ I read this with tears in my eyes, but only because it is so soft and so tender....what a love you share and place so delicately upon these pages for others to 'sigh' at....be well....Happy Easter... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into th [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-31-2002 10:01 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, Dave is so very lucky to have you just as I know you are lucky too, for I believe with all my heart you two are meant to be! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah yes I know this feeling of inability to resist...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tara, sounds like true love hon ![]() when you write of your love for Dave, your heart sings ![]() |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna - He is more wonderful than you know ![]() Melissa - Thank you for you reply. You are always so sweet chickie ![]() Tracey - I'm hope he will like it! Thank you. Lauren - Awww.. you are so sweet Lauren. Thank you. I hope you had a wonderful holiday ![]() Noah - We are lucky to have each other ![]() James - I'm glad you know the feeling. Thanks for coming into read. Susan - It's his amazing love that makes my heart sing. ![]() "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (04-01-2002 12:54 AM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tara, Beautiful! this just sings of your love. you made me SMILE, and I am so happy for you sweet friend! You deserve all the happiness and love your heart can hold. You and Dave are very lucky to have one another. Always hold onto that special love! Take care. Love ya. Amy ![]() "you can't stop |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Tara, you write of your love for Dave as though your heart may burst from so much joy! Wonderful! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
i LOVE this!! -Dave, Tara's Zealously Non-critical Fanboi |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love it, penned straith from your loving heart.....well done ![]() Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tara, this is so beautiful and loving.......the love you share is special......treasure it always....hugs to you sweet poetess...... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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