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Words_of_Glitter
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0 posted 2002-03-31 09:38 PM


I wish someone would write me a song - about me
And all my little idiosyncracies
Give it a catchy tune so it will get stuck in your head
And I will know that the whole world is thinking about me
Even if only you and me know
I wish I was married to some famous revered poet
Who wrote about our love
and described it in such beauty that even I - the one experiencing 1/2 the love - would be amazed
But most of all - I wish my poetry would touch people in such a way
That I could fill them with any emotion I wanted I wish you knew my poems were about you and they could change your mind about me

"Time really does fly by and no one knows where it goes, so if you have something to say or do, say or do it now."

© Copyright 2002 Sarah Morehouse - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-03-31 09:59 PM


Hi Sarah! This poem is very interesting, and has me sitting here thinking!
I like the idea of wishing someone would write a song about you, but how about they wrote a whole cd about you? That way you'd be more than a one hit wonder
Enjoyed the read!

RP

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2 posted 2002-03-31 10:12 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I can understand how you feel, sweet friend, this is indeed very powerful! (sigh) I am sure when you find your love, he'd love to dedicate dozens of poems or songs to you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sarah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-31-2002 10:13 PM).]

Krawdad
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3 posted 2002-04-01 08:32 PM


be patient . . . and keep writing

Kraw'

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