Open Poetry #19 |
Complete |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"Complete" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved V1: If I knew what to say I'd told you already, But my heart's a bit shy So bear over with me. It feels like yesterday I met you and said hi, How was I to know we'd Fall in love over night. L: Who'd thought we'd come this far Now I'm on bended knee, And I'm asking you this Girl will you marry me... C: Now please say you will Let me know, you love me still, The gift from your heart Will make me Complete. You're my everything In your love I am drowning, The gift from your heart Will make me Complete. V2: I feel the time is right I take you by the hand, Promise I won't let go I'll always be your man. Let's seal it with a kiss Once and for all this time, It's like a dream come true And tonight is our night. L: Who'd thought we'd come this far Now I'm on bended knee, And I'm asking you this Girl will you marry me... C: Now please say you will Let me know, you love me still, The gift from your heart Will make me Complete. You're my everything In your love I am drowning, The gift from your heart Will make me Complete. B: I feel the magic whenever you're near, And from my eyes I cry these happy tears. Tonight I'm gonna give you all my heart, A love that will last no matter how far...we're apart. C: Now please say you will Let me know, you love me still, The gift from your heart Will make me Complete. You're my everything In your love I am drowning, The gift from your heart Will make me Complete. |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Wow, bry, you have outdone yourself on this one! |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Wassup JB!! Thanks man, I thought so Too!!! It's diffently going to be put to music at some point!! Best Wishes, Brian. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful serenade that is bound to melt her heart forever! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a fabulous song! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Brian, This is wonderful I can almost hear the melody playing in my mind... I enjoyed Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hey Noah & Tara, thank you guys so much, it means alot, more then you'll ever know. I think it's going to be a chart hitter, if I can get it out "JUST" right. Thanks again. Best Wishes. Brian. |
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