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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-03-31 01:34 AM

Remember when it was a dream?
Me pushing you
on the swings.
Simply love.

Now it’s often a maze.
We approach, we retreat
yet dance remains.
Simply love.

Still we are us.
How is it that everything’s different
but nothing’s changed?
Simply love.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-03-31 01:40 AM

Duncan,
Well...for one thing, the legs are longer and it's harder to swing you pulling your feet!

Sorry, I couldn't help myself.

I really like the style of this poem and it's message! I do, seriously it is so good.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-03-31 01:40 AM

Duncan,
you got it in one. Simply put but with deep wisdom. Simply stunning!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-31 11:16 AM

(smiles) Such wonderful wisdom fills your words, sweet friend, I love this, and love is infinite in its dedication! (big hugggsssss) May love always bring peace to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-03-31 11:19 AM

LOL@Larry's reply! This is another great short piece Duncan...another where fewer words are more.
Happy Easter! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-03-31 11:30 AM

Get back on the swing.

Wonderful!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-03-31 01:03 PM

Good writing, Duncan, and heartfelt. Happy Easter.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-03-31 01:26 PM

enjoyed it Duncan..and I am never too old to swing... oops..well you know what I mean...I love being pushed...*s

M

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-03-31 01:56 PM

Duncan,
Simple does it every time, excellent wrie.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-03-31 03:54 PM

Love is so less complicated when it is kept simple.
It's either there or it's not and that sounds pretty simple to me.
And yes, I loved the simplicity in this Duncan.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2002-03-31 05:08 PM

Very nice in depth work ....enjoyable read!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2002-03-31 06:02 PM

I never knew you were such a swinger, Duncan....but you have made swinging into a lovely poem...
I also loved Larry's reply

~lots of hugggsss and chocolate bunnies~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

12 posted 2002-03-31 09:03 PM

Duncan this is painfully true of love, great words here

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

13 posted 2002-03-31 09:16 PM

Duncan,

I enjoyed this as always

Wonderful write.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

14 posted 2002-03-31 09:20 PM

How is it that everything’s different
but nothing’s changed?
Simply love.
Duncan, this just is simply perfect...
I so much enjoy reading your poetry you share and I thank you4this...

*~coco~*

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

15 posted 2002-03-31 10:26 PM

Damn you’re good (hmmm, where did I hear that before??? Rofl)
Dreams heard in a lovers soul
Sung in tune to dreamers breath
Where love is the only goal
Dreamers always find their quest
Dream a dream and love it well
Hold it by a tender thread
Take it carefully from it’s shell
Voice it in a word unsaid

Dreams are simple, love is blind
Float on clouds from up above
Love is meaning, hope is kind
Simple? No. Just simply love

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2002-03-31 11:09 PM

Cowboy~

"Still we are us.
How is it that everything’s different
but nothing’s changed?
Simply love."

I love this

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

17 posted 2002-03-31 11:29 PM

Ah yes! The more things change, the more they remain the same! Love this!

Shenachie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2002-03-31 11:33 PM

Simply nice writing...James

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