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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2002-03-30 06:13 PM

Serenity

White cotton on blue
canvas of many skylines
green serenity
masks nature's survival dance
wrapped inside blue mystic

30/03/02

~*Theresia~*

[This message has been edited by Charisma (03-30-2002 06:14 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-30 06:16 PM

YAY!!! WOW, OH MY GOSH, IT'S SO GREAT TO SEE YOU POSTING AGAIN, WE'VE ALL MISSED YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!!! (kiss on cheek) This is another gorgeous peaceful vision of nature, sweet friend, I just love the beautiful thoughts you come up with! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is dazzling! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-03-30 06:26 PM

Charisma~

This is so very lovely, a delightful read.....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-30 06:33 PM

About time you came home and treated us to some marvelous Tanka....thank you!

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-03-31 12:14 PM

Love it!

((Charisma))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2002-03-31 01:44 AM

Tanka for posting this. It's naturally pleasing.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-03-31 06:01 AM

Noah: thank you dear friend, it is always a pleasure to read your warm replies. And I am glad too that I was able to write a tanka again.
but most of all I am lucky to have you as a warm hearted friend who supports me with all those enthusiastic comments.

Lauren: Thank you for the lovely, glad you liked it.

Sunshine: Thank you dear friend, always fine to come home with all your kind supports

Newel: Thank you

Kethry: thank you dear friend

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-04-01 09:25 PM

This is probably the only true form of poetry that I am familiar with and you've done a lovely job with it. I like what you said about nature's survival dance.

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