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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-30 04:16 PM




(This is a song for my Joanna! )

Whatever Tomorrow Brings
By: Noah Eaton
3/30/02

We lie together
Dreaming of tomorrow
Just thinking of
Millions of ways to love each other
How we can build a rainbow to each other

You wish for
A big white wedding
Wondering
When and where this will happen
I will try and make this dream come true for you, dear lover

Whatever tomorrow brings I will be faithful to you
I want to make you the happiest girl you can be
To you I will always be true
Until we meet you will always be in my dreams
My love...

I will weave
Your pictures with ladies-tresses
I will brew
You some warm cinnamon apple tea
Just improvising ways to fall in love every day

Next to you
We will tan on the beach
We'll watch dolphins
Leap out over the water
And we'll go home simpering the night away

Whatever tomorrow brings I will be faithful to you
I want to make you the happiest girl you can be
To you I will always be true
Until we meet you will always be in my dreams
My love...

Think it loud
Say all that your heart desires
I vow to
Make every effort to make them exist
I wear you like your glass slipper, my Cinderella

It will be
Wonderful if we meet and fall in love
Maybe we
Can have a family and raise some kids
Someday we may have a daughter and we can name her Shakira

Whatever tomorrow brings I will be faithful to you
I want to make you the happiest girl you can be
To you I will always be true
Until we meet you will always be in my dreams
My love...
I love you
I love you
I love you, my love...


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-30-2002 05:23 PM).]

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Greeneyes
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1 posted 2002-03-30 04:20 PM



S  I  G  H






Noah....that's all I can do with this one.....very tender,
love the image it paints.....



~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th


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Victoria
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2 posted 2002-03-30 04:26 PM


Such beautiful thoughts dear heart hugsss

                 ~Victoria

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-03-30 04:29 PM


Noah,
Well I think Lauren said it all. Wonderful write.

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4 posted 2002-03-30 04:29 PM


Lovely...simply breathtaking, Noah.  Love suits you.
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5 posted 2002-03-30 04:40 PM


*Smiles* Wow. That was SO sweet!!! Thank you SO much for posting it! *huggles*
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6 posted 2002-03-30 04:47 PM


Very nice Noah. you have a thing for this girl I take it?   I find it amazing that all we do is express our love and they eat it up. 'tis good to be the poet   keep up the good work my good man-SG

Life is too short, supersize it - SG

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7 posted 2002-03-30 05:20 PM


Beautiful Noah!  I pray that one day you and the girl of your dreams live happily ever after....and do all the wonderful things you talk of in your lovely poetry.
Happy Easter sweetie!  
~Bunny hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2002-03-30 05:37 PM


Awww Noah, this is so beautiful.
Charisma
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9 posted 2002-03-30 05:46 PM


awwwww Noah such a sweet song and penned straight from your loving heart, May love always brighten your path dear friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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10 posted 2002-03-30 06:59 PM


Oh how sweet and how beautiful this is, Noah
I am sure that Joanna will be so impressed and will be swept off her feet with this one.
~hugs to both of you~

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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11 posted 2002-03-30 08:35 PM


Noah, I have read your work for a while now.
What pleases me the most is your effortless open style. God Bless you and Joanna. ThisDiamond

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-03-31 05:03 AM


This is good writing Noah...James
Rex Allen McCoy
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13 posted 2002-03-31 05:18 AM


Noah ... you keep writing like this and one day you'll open your dreamy eyes to pencil another line and you'll find yourself surrounded by 1000 Cinderellas

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14 posted 2002-03-31 09:24 AM


Noah,
Your poem is so precious and so beautiful!
Sigh! I hope that you and your special girl get together!
Neha

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15 posted 2002-03-31 03:05 PM


Noah, this dances!
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16 posted 2002-04-01 04:34 PM


Noah,

This is a great poem!  I loved it!  I hope it all works out for you.

~Laura~

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17 posted 2002-04-01 04:52 PM


Noah~

amazing write sweetie! hope all your
dreams come true...this is beautiful
and i sigh right along with the rest
of them!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

cottage
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18 posted 2002-04-02 12:51 PM


what a beautiful declaration of love and ever after!!

~ cottage

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