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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-03-29 11:31 PM



Blushing Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Oh, blushing moon
Sweet bride of the night
Cheeks in flush of pinkest light
Fullest in glow of heavenly adorn
Standing in marvel of gossamer worn
Lighting the night in hours of delight
Curtsey in shades of pink, pink pale
across night on Milky Way trail
Stars applaud in curtain call
Come once more to bow
blushing moon~



*Thanks to my friend June for the beautiful inspirational thought~
March 29, 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-03-29 11:33 PM


Marge,
this is so souful and visually pleasing - it glowed.
Kethry

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SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-03-29 11:46 PM


Marge, I really like the way you did this.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-03-30 01:27 AM


Really nice Marge...James
Verve
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4 posted 2002-03-30 03:50 AM




It's really cute how you managed to 'shape' your poem like a moon too ...



I liked this one ... it's a joy to read.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2002-03-30 09:50 AM


Kethry~
*hugs* to you gal~

SmartChick~
*smiles* ... my friend, June, said she saw the moon coming up ' like it was blushing at itself for being so absolutely gorgeous...' it stuck like glue !

JamesMichael~
Thanks hon~

Verve~
Oh, thank you so very much~
I'm just a 'moonie' at heart~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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