Another Dose of Passion (Mushy, This is it....Check Mate!!!)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-29 08:24 PM

Upon eve of cool morn before
as breeze of soft does move the door
I yearn and fret to hold you close
and sip again another dose

I let you in my heart, my soul
as sound of bells from churches toll
I let you have my hand in love
upon the wing of softest dove

My years I gave as gift to you
ages of joy, soulful mome's too
For kiss to keep and again taste
upon one night of love in haste

...when...

Two souls as one in twined embrace
as hearts do beat in crimson chase
when arms do shiver in the glow
as eyes do flut in passions flow

As night does then become the morn
upon the sheets of bed when torn
Two lovers lie in slumber close
now spent in need of lustful dose

For embers of the flames do wait
to burn upon the open gate
of passion’s flow into the stream
whence love again tis not a dream!

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-29-2002 08:24 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-29 08:30 PM

(smiles) WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is indeed a passion-punched counter-active poem I just know Mushy will enjoy, sweet friend, I guess we'll just have to wait and see if this is truly a check-mate or it's only just the beginning! (giggles) This is a true delightful and lovely poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-03-29 08:42 PM

OH WOW!!! Huge sighs coming out of Canada tonight! This is one mighty big dose of Passion tonight Barry! Wonderfully done! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-03-29 08:44 PM

As night does then become the morn
upon the sheets of bed when torn
Two lovers lie in slumber close
now spent in need of lustful dose

What better way to spend a night....WOW!!!!!
Beautifully penned, Barry

~warm hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2002-03-29 08:51 PM

barry,

i'd say this was one heck of a beautiful
poem but im not sure if it's enough to
keep sweet mushy at bay for long

In fact hope you're on your toes hehe.
wonderful poem though indeed!!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-03-29 10:43 PM

Yep! Barry be da winna!

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-03-30 09:06 AM

Ths is great, Barry. You write like a dream.
Sandra

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-03-30 11:00 AM

Wench’s Reply
Tactics

I am the wench Magnus I can’t concede
I’m fated to always satisfy your need
Whenever the night is dark or cold
The wench is there for you to hold
My fire wells up to meet your touch
Deny if you can you need me so much
My fire is what you want and crave
Cede to my will and your pride I’ll save

If you ask me to I’ll declare you win
I will know you’ve succumbed to sin
It doesn’t matter what you say publicly
That you are here says it all to me
You can’t resist the touch of my fire
You have to submit to this urgent desire
I’ll say whatever it is you want me to
You’ll know that I know what is true

I’m the wench can you taste fire’s kiss
Come Magnus my friend admit to this
I know you can feel the power of flame
You know that you call out my name
Why not just whisper the words to me
And I’ll declare you the winner totally
You have your pride this I understand
Come with me to the Promised Land

Marsha

Game set and match darling boy

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-30 11:31 AM

Within the dream of thee
doth lie passions sweetly
For mere man to hold, touch
To sip of thy wine and such.

Nay wench I wilt thee not
though thy cauldron is hot
For virtue doth carry me
away from desireth thee.

Wilt thy flame thence die
upon the yard castle high
Wilt thy need ye concede
tis me thy cannot succeed

Let thy bond be once broke
as thy fire thee wilt stoke
Give to me earned victory
concede wench, concede

To ME!!!!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-03-30 11:45 AM

Get with it Mushy
for now it's getting
a little slushy
and I think
it's getting deep
and way too much
for me to
KEEP!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-03-30 11:53 AM

Mushy....don't tell anyone this...OK?

I concede....I promise I will make my next
poem a little less than it could be...so
that you will get the gold and I get the
silver...OK?

Enjoyed the fun...thank you utterly so
much!!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-03-30 11:59 AM

Magnus,
Oh Boy, Almond Joy. Enjoyed

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