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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-29 09:51 PM



Oh Magnus
The Wench Bites Back

Oh Magnus my friend I have to tell you
I’ve done something I didn’t want to do
The wench is out you called my name
My fire is all ready to halt your game
I’m a wench you know my fire is bright
And I simply can’t help frying the knight
Don’t tell me that you find it too warm
Knights are used to passions that storm

Oh Magnus dear friend just yield to me
You know you will cede to fire eventually
How can you resist my flames touch?
Do you deny you want it all so much?
Can I help it if my fire ignites your soul?
Is it my fault that this makes you feel whole?
Didn’t I warn you not to tangle with me?
See how the fire rages on continually

Oh Magnus darling boy why not cede this?
You can’t deny you yearn for flames kiss
I can see you’re beginning to almost glow
Why don’t you just let your feeling show?
Don’t you want to taste the fire in me?
Feel the fire running through you heatedly?
Come on darling boy simply yield or cede
You know I can satisfy your burning need

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Madame Chipmunk
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1 posted 2002-03-29 09:56 PM


Ah ha!......the wench is back!
I've been wondering where she has been hiding.
Its sure good to see her again!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-03-29 10:31 PM


Wench...thy bite is but a mosquito's touch.

Sayeth thee thine wench of burning flame
Doth thee know tis thee playing mine game
For flame of fires ‘gainst skin burneth cold
as armor guards my heart thee wish to hold.

Flames of lust burn bright in thee own eyes
bring to mine ears the telltale tattling sighs
as passions flames are kindled from words
born of Knight, upon the flights of birds.

Tis thee that lust for the Knight of the pen
I hear thy whispers caressing, asking when
Your soul begging, wanting love to fire
lonely passions, flames, embers of desire.

Write of thee conquest of the chosen one
Bring forth thy words, sayeth tis begun
Rest fitfully upon thy cold english bed
as visions of Magnus fill thy lovely head!

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3 posted 2002-03-29 10:32 PM



LOL...Magnus Wins!

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4 posted 2002-03-29 10:57 PM




(giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhhh...Marsha, this is absolutely beautifully passionae and delightful, but I think Magnus has just come back with a great vengeance too like Sunshine said! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo cute, sweet frien, both your wonderful words make me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-29 11:11 PM


Wench's Fire
Wench's Reply

You summoned the heat you called the flame
Now you’ll dance in fire or you’ll go insane
See how the fire melts your metallic skin
See how you flare with the flames within
Don’t try to deny the desire I see in you
Cede to my will you know you must do
Come into my heat feel the fire burn and roar
Touch my heated soul let me help you soar

You want this heat you can’t deny you do
I heard you pleading for me to ignite you
I know the fire’s hot and you feel my heat
Can see your eyes dilate hear your pulse beat
What are you afraid of if you let yourself go?
Maybe you’re afraid to let your feelings show
I know you want to feel my flame cover you
You want to feel this the whole night through

You desire this heat you can’t resist my charm
What is so wrong to cede there is no harm
Lay down your arms lets cement our peace
Just come over to my side this battle let’s cease
You know there’s no need to fret about this
What does it matter you lose let’s kiss
The fire wins out but that is always the way
It’s fate darling boy now enjoy passions play

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (03-30-2002 06:46 AM).]

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6 posted 2002-03-29 11:53 PM


Magnus and Marsha,
when cold of steel meets the flame
who will concede thus lose the game
Will the steam as cold meets heat
serve to blind and bind defeat?

Will the battle once more blaze
and amuse the brave not phased
by the heat of passion's  fight
lust and laughter through the night

Maid and knight now who cans't win
let the battle now begin
Victored knight against the flame
all shall know the wenches name

And we who bide for the fight
laugh aloud in sweet delight
It matters not with wins or losing
the crown is given at peruser's choosing
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-03-29 11:58 PM


OH Mushy Darling Girl..

I cede ONLY to the night..
For lids do fall on eyes
Upon the morrow I awake
and passions of me..me
You will slake!!

Till then fair wench of east
rest alone in thy cold bed
Enjoy the passion of my feast
as dreams of me are there...

There in your head!!!

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8 posted 2002-03-30 12:03 PM


magnus-"sayeth thee thine"
please do not use these in a sentence together, it's like saying I have you yours, other than that this is some neat stuff feudal lords.J

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9 posted 2002-03-30 01:29 AM


Mushy,
So if there is a poetic conecession...I assume it will be in adult!

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