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Love's Forest
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Love's Forest |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... 
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The feelings flow from deep within, wanting so desperately for me to let them in. Slowly they flow through my system. I know they are there and I know when I listen. Through my blood, and through my veins, but with my heart you play no games. I try to live my life despite. But can I? In spite of this light. You can't play love for a fool, but can he, over your eyes, lay wool? I lie in bed, her on my thoughts; Feel as if alone and lost. I wander through love's forest. Hear my thoughts, their chaotic chorus. Love takes a man's commitment. Sometimes I prefer this forest of abandonment. Abandonment by my own mind; in these trees, there is no sublime. Among the moss, a lone faucet flowing water forces my feelings in a closet. Lay with me on the wet, damp ground. Lay with me love, don't worry about the gown. Can we just forget about the repercussions? Give in, welcome the consequences. Lay with me my love, alone, here, in love's forest. 3/28/02 [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (03-29-2002 05:44 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope you forever hold true love close and walk hand in hand with your sweetheart in this forest of life! (big hugggsssss) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
*sigh* I know how you feel. When you want to let the emotions go, but at the same time... your head is blaring the consequences. Life is crazy. Who knows what'll happen... things have a funny way of working out somehow for the better. *hugs* I loved this. It was romantic, yet it had some edge to it. A sense of reality that I think is missing in a lot of poems about or revolving around love. Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed it. Your Memina Cela passera. |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Ah...so this is where you've been hiding! Lol This is very well done---I'll admit...this is really good! One must have the courage of a lion to deal with Love and the like... Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a really good poem hun...i enjoyed it a lot!! Great job!! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*Hugs Ti* Titus, I honestly think this is one of the best poems I've read from you. Excellent work, my friend, excellent work. I am a geek!! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Titus, nicely penned poem dear, my fav lines "You can't play love for a fool, but can he, over your eyes, lay wool?"  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Titus!! the words you wove were magic, pure and simple..now why can't I find a guy to write me something as beatiful as you have done? *hugs* I highly enjoyed it and made my day a little bit better..Love, Kristen |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow, this is great!! Thanx for pointing me here to see it!!  ELMO |
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