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Strange Encounters (modified)
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Strange Encounters (modified) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Life throws in people, caustic events mar the in betweens far from the proms, the happy celebrated sweet sixteens the comings of age, mystery men release childhood reminders stalk in crowds, find lost contacts through telepathic finders Life throws in people and their countless pets in between far from the gentle coastlines, their manners now preened the coming of sages, the wise that kept secluded lives talk outloud of accidental encounters with friends once five. It may happen strangely as you drive on a freeway lane a window will roll down, out of the blue you'll hear your name. mystery men will tease you out of your flawless past their telepathic finders have found you amazed to the last... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-29-2002 07:47 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy now this is one of your utter utter best, I love it. YOU have such a fabulous talent and in this you portray it to pure perfection. Outstanding writing as always you show how well you can write The way you wove this together darling boy is amazing, I love it superb writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan, An interesting write, I enjoyed the read. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Absolutely intriguing, Martin  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I think something like this should be elaborated, thanks all for looking in |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Whether it is sernedipity or something that seems to marvel us all, we can always trample across these mysterious findings! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful intriguing piece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As I read you, I hear the male voice... pragmatic of events and firm with interpretation... strong. The color red. ThisDiamond |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, like how you mention serendipity This Diamond, and each can interpret from their own log of strange encounters. |
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