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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-03-29 03:33 PM



Life throws in people, caustic events mar the in betweens
far from the proms, the happy celebrated sweet sixteens
the comings of age, mystery men release childhood reminders
stalk in crowds, find lost contacts through telepathic finders

Life throws in people and their countless pets in between
far from the gentle coastlines, their manners now preened
the coming of sages, the wise that kept secluded lives
talk outloud of accidental encounters with friends once five.

It may happen strangely as you drive on a freeway lane
a window will roll down, out of the blue you'll hear your name.
mystery men will tease you out of your flawless past
their telepathic finders have found you amazed to the last...



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-29-2002 07:47 PM).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-03-29 03:42 PM


Martin darling boy now this is one of your utter utter best, I love it. YOU have such a fabulous talent and in this you portray it to pure perfection.
Outstanding writing as always you show how well you can write

The way you wove this together darling boy is amazing, I love it superb writing


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-03-29 03:48 PM


ecrivan,
An interesting write, I enjoyed the read.

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-03-29 07:12 PM


Absolutely intriguing, Martin

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-03-29 08:21 PM


I think something like this should be elaborated, thanks all for looking in


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5 posted 2002-03-29 09:06 PM




(sigh) Whether it is sernedipity or something that seems to marvel us all, we can always trample across these mysterious findings! (big hugggssssss) This is a wonderful intriguing piece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-30 03:32 PM


As I read you, I hear the male voice... pragmatic of events and firm with interpretation... strong.
The color red. ThisDiamond

ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-03-31 12:01 PM


Noah,
like how you mention serendipity

This Diamond,
and each can interpret from their own log of strange encounters.


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