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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-03-29 10:19 AM

Take me to our place where no one else goes
a secret cove where seas embrace the shore
salty whispers of the wind seduce
and pearly sands embed love forever more

where sunshine plays upon our tan lines
and surf silently flows with our ecstasy
take me to our place where no one else goes
and seashells whisper upon memories

take me where seagulls serenade the cliffs
their wings upon a breeze of satisfaction
echos of our sighs dance within their eyes
upon coral wingspans of the ocean

take me to our place where no one else goes
upon a journey of whispers in love’s cove

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-29-2002 10:20 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-03-29 10:25 AM

My kind of place!!
Your word pictures are so wonderfully vivid.
Lovely writing Victoria~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-03-29 10:27 AM

Where sunshine plays upon our tan lines...excellent...and admiring eyes play too...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-03-29 11:15 AM

thank you james and lori..glad you enjoyed hugss

~Victoria

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-03-29 11:42 AM

~V~

sounds like heaven!!

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

5 posted 2002-03-29 11:47 AM

Sounds awfully tempting Victoria
Especially written by your wonderful pen

You capture moments so well

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-03-29 12:28 PM

there is a place like that
where the eyes touch
and whispers moan quiet

would be grand to see you there

enjoyed this Victoria

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

7 posted 2002-03-29 12:44 PM

Your words took me there.

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

8 posted 2002-03-29 01:54 PM

An island pardise would be great right about now...

Loved the images and the sweet sentiments this one produced...nice one V!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2002-03-29 02:54 PM

yes. . . I like this one Victoria. . .a wonderful picture you paint here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

10 posted 2002-03-29 03:45 PM

Victoria darling girl this is awesome, I mean it, this is an incredible piece of writing, utterly utterly amazing writing it’s so full of beauty and is utterly divine.

Your heart and soul is heard in this diamond Your words painted this beautiful picture darling girl.

You always excel, in this you’ve proved, if it needed it, that you are an exceptional writer. And this is an absolutely beautiful and perfect example of all your posts, perfect really poetically perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-03-29 03:46 PM

There....what a pretty name for a delightful place....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2002-03-29 03:55 PM

Victoria,
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2002-03-29 04:54 PM

Thank you all so very much..so nice of you to peek in today

~Victoria

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-03-29 06:49 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may your love take you to new horizons and all your dreams and make your life one magic carpet ride into paradise, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! We all love you so much, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-03-29 06:50 PM

take me to our place where no one else goes
upon a journey of whispers in love’s cove

This sounds like a perfect place to hide from life....beautifully written, Victoria.

~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (03-29-2002 06:51 PM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2002-03-29 08:47 PM

thank you noah and lyra...

hugss

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

17 posted 2002-03-30 06:15 PM

Sounds like a lovely place

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2002-03-30 06:22 PM

Now, this is my kinda place....like this one
Vic...very nice!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

19 posted 2002-03-31 11:03 AM

Thank you Michael and Barry..Hope you both have a lovely Easter..

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