Open Poetry #19 |
Veronica, Daughter of Jerusalem |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
they tell me that He will be coming soon I remember the first time I saw Him we were outside the city, on that hill and He spoke to us He spoke to us about our lives, calling us blessed 'Blessed are the poor in spirit' He said and we wondered how we, the poor whom He spoke of how we could be blessed because to us, our blessings had not yet come but, we soon learned that He spoke not of the blessings of Earth, but of Heaven and so, we followed we followed when and where we could we watched Him speak to thousands we watched Him heal the sick and raise the dead we watched Him bless the children and we watched Him forgive the sinner we marveled at Him we believed that He was who He said the Son of God but now, now He is to be crucified put to death like a common criminal by the very people that He came to save we watched as they spat on Him, and mocked Him and we wept we wept even as we weep now we weep for Him He who had come to save us but, who now, cannot even save Himself see now, He comes! my heart breaks for Him and my tears will never stop falling as I look upon Him now stripped and beaten carrying His own cross, how is He able? He falls He is too weak, do they not see? He cannot see the way the blood from the thorns they have placed on His head covers His eyes and yet, they continue to beat and mock Him I will go and wipe the blood from His eyes I could not bear to see Him suffer so I had to wipe the tears from my own eyes to see and then, He looked at me He looked at me, and He said 'Daughter of Jerusalem, weep not for me, but weep for yourself, and for your children' and I found that I was weeping for us all for who will save us now? wait wait look look at my cloth it is it is His face the face of our Saviour NOTE: Although none of the Gospel accounts of the Crucifixion mention this incident or the name of Veronica, the legend of this story and her name still live today. It is the Sixth of the "Stations of the Cross" that tell the story of Christ's journey to the Cross. For more about the Stations of the Cross: The Stations of the Cross For more about St. Veronica: Veronica of Jerusalem St. Veronica Image: St. Veronica by El Greco -------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (03-29-2002 02:52 PM).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I got chills reading this....a beautiful recounting of all that all should be thankful for...thank you Sven, for bringing this to light [This message has been edited by Decaflame (03-29-2002 02:59 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh John, this is sooooooo heartbreaking to me too every time I think of His suffering, though I know deep down His face forever reflects in all our hearts and His love will always live on. (sigh) This is a wonderful portrayal of one of the stories of His last days, sweet friend, God Bless you always, we all love you so much, this touched my heart so very deeply! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent Sven..one of my favorites...James |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Do I really have to say anything here about all the things I learn when I read your writing? Wonderfully presented. Lots and lots of insight here. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, this was powerfully imaged and so real I could feel the anguish. Perfect for this time of the year. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is truly an amazing piece of work . I was in tears yesterday afternoon walking the stations and again today reading this. Veronica has always been my favorite. God Bless you and may our Risen Lord be with you always. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
And a great poem. this legend became, thanks for sharing all it's beauty. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
John, I enjoyed this poem very much. It is an excellent depiction of people helping one another. ~Laura~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . I'm glad that you could find much in my words. . . and that you enjoyed this poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I always wondered if I was the only one who remember this story, as it was one of my favorites when I was a lil girl...still is one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing this keeper Sven. (((Hugs))) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands, you warm the cockles of my heart I love your little vignettes of life Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
'Daughter of Jerusalem, weep not for me, but weep for yourself, and for your children' Amazing write sir.... Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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